You outdid yourself on this chapter. I looves it.

I'm lovvvvving it! Great story thanks for writing.

Updated June 09' !

EEKS... This is late Jan 2011...

I should always check when the last update was posted and I forget before reading. Love your story and now have a vested interest of a few hours of my own time in seeing these two through the end.

I do hope you have not gotten into an accident or something and that all is well in your personal life. If not, please accept my apologies.

That said please know that you accepted a responsibility when you decided to begin writing. If you are not going to update add, "On Hiatus" to the status of any story without regular updates so that readers do not waste their own personal time and move on. If not then simply have the courtesy to write a last chapter to finish it which could be easily done.

B does not have to be changed, the wolves do not have to enter into the picture (they could just accept that it is not their business since she is not a Q and J can just take the disappointment like any other man would when not chosen over another. A last chapter where they just agree to 'be' together and Edward recognizes the dawning love inherent in his lust, promising himself to take all the time he needs to 'explore' his newly found revelation with B. Simple.

Looking forward to some reply either way.

This story is so fucking awesomeand I really hope you'll continue it! :)

Will you be finishing this fic? I hope you will continue this story! :)

It's a shame you haven't updated this story. The first nine chapters are captivating.

Yum (:

yum! mmm, i love it when edward gets horny when he normally doesnt ;)

This story is AWESOME! Why did you stop updating? Please please please come back to us! It doesn't matter how long goes by, we always are happy for updates! :)

Hi! I just started reading this story today and I love, love, love it! Please tell me that you will finish it!

You're a very good writer and such talent should be utilised. So I hope you finsih this story, I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat until you do!

Thanks!

Claudia

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and very sad to see the end of the chapters. I'm truly hoping that things are well with you, and that you have just lost the spark for fanfiction. I'm also hoping that you find your spark again and consider continuing your stories. You are very good. I would love to see how things progress from him. thanks for you words.

Love this story!

Hoping you'll update soon. I can't wait to see what Jake tries to tell Bella. Hopefully she'll just be irritated with him but maybe get a little information. I'm glad that she'n so not into Jake in your story.

Please update.

So I wonder will Bella go to LaPush with Mike and the others or will she stay heeding Edward's warning? I mean now that she has seen the softer side of him as you put it, she might just have enough reason to believe he has feelings for her and might want to he "his" whatever that means to her. Tricky situation when you know you shouldn't but can't resist. Been there, and unfortunately done that.

So Jasper has even less control over himself than in the original and it looks like Edward can barely keep himself in check as well. I hope he buys Bella a replacement shirt. I'm enjoying your story, so familiar yet so different too. Cool.

I was not thinking Edward was out hunting when he did not go to her room tuesday night, I was thinking he didn't show at school or at Bella's house because he was playing a game of trying to make her squirm. I thought that is what he was planning, didn't he want to make her crazy so that he could be calm and have her lust after him well it was working when he kind of played hard to get by not being around on Tuesday but then as it turned out that was not what was going on at all. By the way I was feeling angry with him for wanting to play games with her I mean when he already has her then there is no reason to play with her emotions. Well now she said yes to Mike to go as a group not to go on a date with him or to the dance or anything and she wants Edward to treat her like a lady and ask her out like any normal guy and to spend time with her just hanging out. Anywhoo.