Please continue I love it it’s amazing!

Well damn !

every chapter is the fucking same. Edward wants to fuck bella...but instead he just molests her and acts like a douche bag. And bella acts like the easy whore she is. same thing every chapter...over and over and over again.

why is Edward reading that book then? doesn't seem like something he would want to read since hes subjected to those kind of thoughts all the time.

Why is he so arrogant? Hes a virgin but he thinks he will be the ultimate lover? Ya I really fucking doubt that. Honestly he just comes off as a douche. And bella is a total whore. And just like all the other girls apparently, sitting there panting like a damn dog.

That comment Edward made? I'm the dragon? LOL hes a stupid 17 year old boy! a dragon...LOL Edward? Mr I grew up with two loving rich parents? Mr I live with my new rich mommy and daddy? Mr eternal highschool? That kid is so far from being "the dragon" its not even funny!

Jasper? He might be the dragon. But not Edward...never Edward.

Oh, do i love dark Edward! Seeing his thoughts written down like that gave a whole new light to him, and my god is it hot! Im supposed to make dinner now... i think not! I'll continue this fantastic story instead! Pizza for the fam instead! Haha.

Loving naughty Edward and super curious how things would have gone down... would Edward ha e turned her on purpose? Would it have been an accident? Would she survive? Would they have sex before all that? So many juicy questions :)

So Tanya was his first kiss? Yuck...

It's hot...hot..hot..

I really don't get why Edward would touch the worlds whore...exspecially the UGLIEST DENALI WHORE. Tanya has delicate features? graceful curves? LOL I saw her in twilight...her head was too big, her hair was frizzy, her eyes were catlike and kinda creepy, she had no shape to her waist, or her ass, her neck is too short...like where is the rest of it? Shes really not attractive.

I think this story would be a lot better with so much bella lol. the dreams are fucking stupid, all that sleep talking...STUPID...bellas pov...fucking stupid.

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Are they ever gonna just do it.. it's killing me.. lol

I rreeeealllly wish you didn't have alice come with Edward...shes so fucking annoying! always fucking meddling in everyone elses business!
if I was a vamp, I might kill alice just so she couldn't annoy me anymore

really? NO ONE wants to hear how "lovely" tanyas body is...we all saw Tanya in twilight...strawberry blond my ass...beautiful my ass! Tanya is fucking UGLY and a nasty used up whore to boot.

I get that hes not a gentleman but its obvious hes not been with a human...so how many vamps? oh mg god please tell me that hes not been with the whore sisters? cause I swear if he has...then this story can fuck itself.