Dark Edward's awesome! I love the way you write Edward's character, Dominant dark Edward is seriously hot! I can't wait for the next chapter and to see how he handles all the temptation.

God, I love your Edward! This is the POV and Edward characterization I've been searching for. A vamp/lusty Edward. I love Darward, Domward, Fuckward, whatever you call him.

This is extremely well written as well. I love it so far. Fuck her or kill her? I'm very intrigued to see which one he wants more. I'm sure it's fucking or the story would be pretty damn short! lol

Looking forward to seeing where you take them. Is this a retelling of Twilight? Or will you make it AU? It seems like a Midnight Sun without the cockblocking and with an Edward that I want. And by want, I mean an Edward that doesn't make me want to roll my eyes with his pansyness. I love SM's Edward but I really love a dark Edward that makes me nervous, scares me a bit, and still makes me want to rip his clothes off. Which is what your Edward is. Hope you continue with this.

I want more please

Fantastic. I'm interested to see where this is going to go. It's funny- after seeing the film, my best friend made a comment about Edward's face when he smelled Bella for the first time. Her description of his reaction matched the one you wrote that didn't concern her blood. I've been toying with the idea of writing a story based on that premise, and after reading this, I just wanted to let you know that if I ever do, it was not to intentionally copy this story- which, like I said, is still fantastic.

Sincerely,

MarsOutcast

Love the way you are writing Edward! It was really interesting to see him battling for control of his instinct to take the blood he craved. The tension felt very real and immediate; I especially liked the extra temptation of the blush. Brilliant start and I'm looking forward to more!

I love it! Your descriptions and the characters feelings are reeling me in!

YES...Thank You, Thank You, Thank You for giving me another Dark Edward story to look forward too!

I don't care what anyone says, Dark/Dominant Edward is far more sexier than Fluffy Edward.

Strong beginning...you've managed to capture my attention and that says alot;-). Normally I veer away from the 'Twilight" rewrites just cause they all read the same but I am rather intrigued by yours.

Just please don't go and soften him up too much in order to win Bella. I see this alot and it just ruins the story if its suppose to be "Dark Edward" than keep him Dark and don't apologize for it:-).

Can't wait to see this plays out!

your A.N is seriously right. that was really intriguing and very hot lol. thanks for the update. i look forward to whatever you have in store.

I love just about everything you write- but you're giving me whiplash here!

Ok, three questions, and two comments:

Question 1: Are you abandoning all your Inuyasha stuff? *plese! No!*

2: when is the next chapter of ANYTHING coming up.

3: are you some kind of masochist? You have so many fics going at once! My head would explode!

Comment 1: I am loving this story as much as any other and will continue to follow your crazy posting habits for as long as you post, because you're just that good.

2: Lustward? Wow. That one shocked me a little, honestly. I am interested.

I agree, dark and dangerous wins every time.

This is going to be fun!

Edward's a vicious horny man!lol.

Well, this is quite intriguing! You have my undivided attention! Please update soon, I can tell I'm really going to enjoy this story ]

yep. hes hot.

i want him to find about ME like that.

except... i dont excalty want him eating me xD

Man! That was an awesome chapter. Extremely well written, carefully thought through, and interesting character depth adds to what TwiFans already know about these characters.

I love all the premonition you've built into the story. Alice knows so Edward knows but pretends he doesn't. Bella knows but hasn't realized it yet...

(Ha! "striking specimen" LOL)

DELICIOUS!