Reviews for Show and Don't Tell
kceeblevinshotmail.com chapter 27 . 7/9
What a wonderful story! And for this to be your first? Wow! Thank you for sharing your talent with us all.
winterhorses chapter 7 . 12/12/2022
I can say from experience that E needs get as far away from that brand of crazy as soon as possible. My ex did that to me and kept pulling me back in…once he even held a knife over his wrist after waving it in the air at me. That finally made me realize I was in danger, too, and needed to end it for good, no matter what he might do to himself.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2022
Good
Shazzeer chapter 27 . 7/22/2022
Now that I’m done I’m going over to E’s POV ;).
I really hopped to read about the wedding, seeing it from his POV will be just as magic ;)
Shazzeer chapter 26 . 7/22/2022
I’ve been waiting for him to ask her to marry him ;).
Pretty much just a formality at thins point ;)
Shazzeer chapter 25 . 7/22/2022
Renee is a whirlwind and funny af XD, Renee and Alice together is a storm waiting to happen ;).
They have the support of their combined family,
And now are pretty much moved in together at their house ;).

And now 4-6 weeks of romance and dates and getting to know the others friends that they’ve neglected due to being so absorbed by the other ;)
Shazzeer chapter 24 . 7/22/2022
* snorts * without reading E’s POV it’s obvious who or what Eduardo is ;). And rest is very important when sicknor in Edwards case, stabbed. Bella has some PTSD responses and flashbacks to having to part with him…
Renee really should kick Charlie in the head for not coming to Seattle and seeing Bella! I get that he is pissed about Edward dating Tanya at the time he professed his undying love for Bella… but Charlie just needs to listen to understand!

And that nurse better keep her hands to herself ;)
Shazzeer chapter 23 . 7/22/2022
If course he survived, any doubters that didn’t? ;).
I could see him dying if Bella was pregnant ant got to keep a mini Edward for herself and the whole family rallying around her and helping everyone get thru the los of Edward.

But that wouldn’t be HEA ;)

And there’s Kate, wonder if Tanya is going to end up in prison or if she gets a plea of insanity and is sentenced to a mental institution.
Shazzeer chapter 22 . 7/21/2022
So she did use her mother’s death as an excuse to hold on to Edward. And the she snapped and attempted to hurt them and when that didn’t work she tried to hurt herself.

Hopefully Masen slept thru it and the police officers or EMTs contacted Emmet to get Masen.
Shazzeer chapter 21 . 7/21/2022
She might’ve accidentally stabbed him when they fought over the knife or it was intentional. And I don’t believe Tanya died from the beating Bella gave her.
Shazzeer chapter 20 . 7/21/2022
I knew Tanya was gonna come back. She has to learn to let go, Kate isn’t there yet to take care of her.

And time to call the police for vandalism and disturbing the peace. They couldn’t even get one night for themselves.
Bet Masen is awake now to, poor guy will be scarred for life!
Shazzeer chapter 19 . 7/21/2022
Hopefully that’s the last we will see from Tanya… or she’s hiding in the shadows and waiting to strike!
And despite where trauma, one doesn’t talk or handle kids like that!
Shazzeer chapter 18 . 7/21/2022
Yes, let’s leave Tanya in the dust! What a sneak to go to the movies and infringe on the family time when se wasn’t invited!

Let go to Chuck E Cheese and play and eat pizza!
Shazzeer chapter 17 . 7/21/2022
Yeah, Tanya really shouldn’t be working with such young kids. Sure she has some trauma and isn’t all stable but still, she should’ve asked for help.

Let’s hope no irreversible damage was done to the kids.
Shazzeer chapter 16 . 7/21/2022
Ha ha, they made a straight up mess of painting the spare bedroom XD. That lavender is clashing with Edwards hair ;).
I do r think Edward protects Bella from hurting herself, I believe that she is just more aware around him ;).

Yeah, the least he can do is break up with her in person and not do the asshole way if text or phone call!
Tanya at least has Kate as support and to lean on.

I’m waiting to read Edward’s POV till I’m done with this one ;)
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