Reviews for Show and Don't Tell
Twilight Fan 21 chapter 2 . 3/31/2009
I like it.I just want to point out Alice would not let Masen wear what you said he wore she make him be very they would not greet each othe Bitch and skank but aside from that great
misswhiting chapter 2 . 3/31/2009
I LIKE THIS EDWARD...

POSY-Y SOON-Y!
calileah chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
Love it!
nicedenice chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
flirty bella and hott uncle E! whew! keep it going!
ladhoo93 chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
i like this a lot, its different. i do wish it wasn't so sexual.
semalina chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
Really great story, can't wait for the next chapter!
Raven-Rach chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
Loving this! Great story so far ]
shadowXxxnightfoxx chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Bwhha he ran right in the doorframe from staring lol nice keep up the good work!
Liz1208 chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
HAHA!

zomg! that was so great! GOD, youre so funny!

with all bellas comments and not forgetting jacob's turn for something meaty... wow i was histerical when i read that!

this is so fun

please update soon

x
Lorinstarr chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
lovely!

update!
AnUnbrokenHorse aka RushtonElf chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
I don't usually like kids but I like Masen!

Nice job so far!
CrookedSmile24 chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
LOL...can't believe Edward ran into a wall! They dazzle each other ;). Great start.
Drama4More chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
Haha great start. OMG Edward Cullen banged into a wall? Lol. Masen is so cute and funny! Please update soon x
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