Reviews for Happily Ever After: Part One
Just-Soldier-On chapter 18 . 12/18/2010
So sad and heart breaking. Just cute. I read every single page so far.
WhyWontTheyLetUsDeleteThesse chapter 52 . 1/7/2010
coolio! loved it alot!
eclipse7rosalie7nessie chapter 5 . 12/14/2009
wow. one of my best friends told me about this story and shes always talking about it and shes so right it is a good story. callie is such a cool character, keep up the great awesome work.
TwyRyse56 chapter 2 . 11/23/2009
This is good, good luck with the second part to this, I started reading that one before this one, then relized that it was the second part and started reading this one... So anyways good luck and good job with this one
Jacob.Paul.Lover.2009 chapter 51 . 10/24/2009


Naww poor callie ):

I feel sorry for her.

Please post again soon!
DragonDancer93 chapter 51 . 10/24/2009
:D i love your story
sav x chapter 51 . 10/24/2009
great chapter mary - really sad though. Cant wait till your bday (egg-rolling would be so much fun) xx
sav x chapter 50 . 10/20/2009
WHOH great chappie chlo - i absolutely cant wait for more - glad callie's alright. Count me in for the film, lol.

Jacob.Paul.Lover.2009 chapter 50 . 10/20/2009
Aw ):

Atleast the guy cant get her when shes with jake...

Unless the guy turns vamp...


please psot again soon!
fanpire01 chapter 50 . 10/19/2009

thanks so much for the birthday update!

love you so much!

Savannah's not gonna kill you anymore!

good old billy! How bad does Jasper (Callie's dad!) feel? Really bad i bet! hee hee!

oh, please can we have another update soon? please?




p.s. congrats on reaching 50 chapters! excellent!

YourSavingGrace chapter 50 . 10/19/2009
Aw! Yay she gets to stay with Jakey! I seriously love them together, they are soo perfect! Really good chapter, I can't wait to see what else happens with her dad!
fanpire01 chapter 49 . 10/19/2009

great chapter!

love it!

glad you used the loan shark idea rather than the other one, i prefered this one, it's more exciting!

Come on! update already!

for my birthday? :) pwease? *puppy dog eyes!*

you know you want to!



p.s. thanks for my new moon movie guide book again!

i love it!

pheobe21 chapter 49 . 10/18/2009
That was amazing please update
YourSavingGrace chapter 49 . 10/16/2009
Oh Sugar Honey Ice Tea! This is gettin' good! Poor Cal! I absolutely love how much Jasper Cullen loves Cal though! Because you know not many people really involve Jasper in their stories and if they do, he's just the "unstable one" or whatever. But I love him in this story! And although I haven't reviewed the last couple of chapters they too were AMAZING! Poor Jakey has to deal with knowing his mom cheated and his real dad is a mucho crappy excuse for a man. I most definitley cannot wait to see what happens when they get to Callie!
Deejay3 chapter 49 . 10/16/2009
okay! no need for me to tell you that super amazingly talented and i lovbe the story. BUT I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER RIGHT FUCKING NOW! lol. kidding. but seriusly.. post it fast! you cant leave me hanging like that. i want to know what happened to callie.. and from the preview thingy.. it lukd like bella killed her?
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