|Reviews for Home of the Spartans|
| Marit12 chapter 23 . 9/17/2013
Uh I love this story! It's so amazing. I really like your writing style, it seems so real, but I have to say, that there are quite a few (spelling) mistakes. Nevertheless, I have to say, it doesn't change the awesomeness of this story. I've seen your sequel is on, but you stopped writing - what's up? I really want to know, how the story continues :)
Please go on writing,
Greetings from Germany,
| Vampirediariesrock1 chapter 12 . 4/22/2012
Umm mabe Billy maddison he says that.
| Luuh2311 chapter 19 . 1/23/2012
I loved this chapter. I love Demi Lovato's song, it's so beautiful, and it fit the story perfectly.
I'm loving the story, so much.
| sydneyj chapter 13 . 11/9/2011
that line and Xander are from buffy the vampire slayer!
| Hannah chapter 18 . 11/1/2011
Oh, the drama. A third of me wants something like this to happen while another third is slapping the first third for wanting it and the last third is just freaking out about yellow cars and trying to decide if I have a crush or not. First third is fairytale loving, second third is logic (eh, who pays attention to it? Oh yeah, my first third when it's being slapped), and the last third is my walk in closet where I stuff random things, quotes, questions, etc.
| Hannah chapter 3 . 10/31/2011
You loooooooove him. Hee hee. I think I've been reading too much Maximum Ride.
| erica chapter 12 . 9/18/2011
Oh my damn is from wat I like about u yeah I kno u alredy finidhed the story but I'm just sayin...
| Wolfgilr4ever chapter 7 . 8/19/2011
My math teachers name is . That's so weird and cool right?
| Lizzy Belikov chapter 22 . 1/2/2011
| browneyedgirl122 chapter 23 . 8/9/2010
| Ebory Moore chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
hey. I have some pointers for ya.
1. Make sure you use grammar check in Word, because you have some serious problems with spelling.
2. UCLA is a college. It is NOT a bording school. Since you used a very known institution, it makes you sound as if you lacked knowledge. Maybe make up your own name for an actual bording school.
3. If the characters do attend to college, make the dialogue more mature. The way you narrate and the characters' interactions sound quite juvenile. That could be solved by making the characters young teens.
It is a good idea, that with some prior research and pollishing could make a very good story.
| Butterflies-LastForever chapter 10 . 6/5/2010
| Rosalie-Emmett-Kristin-Jett chapter 17 . 5/9/2010
Omg omg omg HOW COULD U DO THAT!
| xoxoWishICouldSparklexoxo chapter 23 . 5/7/2010
Hehe! Cute story xoxoWICSxoxo
| YamiGZ chapter 19 . 3/25/2010
I love how u put Don't forget as the song. How at that moment he began to remember! It wass great!