Great story and chapters. Jennifer Baratta

Well Done; Please continue with additional chapters.

Interesting. I would like to see more.

Finally catching up! I loved this, and you have a sympathetic and excellent grasp of Lennier. I like very much his comments on the combination of attributes found in Sharon; it fits in well with my ideas on the compartmentalization that hinders the forward progress of the Minbari.

Also loved the Ambrose Bierce quote. I tell my husband all the time that as far as I'm concerned, electricity is some kind of entity that lives in the walls and is released into wires when something's plugged into an outlet. I am no physicist.

Lastly, I like the Vorlon technology being plant-like. Organic is often taken to mean animal-like. This is different and very intriguing.

Normally I don't read stories that are OC driven, but since this about the unsung hero of B5 I decided to give it a look over. I am impressed, ever since that I saw that one ep. in Season 5 with the two matince worker, I really do like story about the behind the scenes. I really like Cheif Miller, she someone I would want on my side. Anyway keep up the good work ~Paladin13

This story really should get more reviews, it's very creative and original, and the lovely long chapters are a nice change. Keep it up!

P.S. A quick question: In your imagination, is Miller that blonde engineering person who has a scene in "Grey 17 Is Missing?

It's great! Hope you can update soon.

Fascinating stuff, and I like the characters. Got a little lost in the tech talk, but still intriguing enough to check back later. Carry on.