|Reviews for The Death of Paul|
| Amethyst Kitsune chapter 11 . 3/21/2014
Some of these ideas are really good. I had a debate with someone I know about how to torture Paul. But that was a while ago.
| Guest chapter 14 . 10/14/2012
I'm sorry, but I can't approve of this. 1. Paul is not a bastard, 2. Why would anyone do something so mean to Paul? And 3. This is just wrong... Why don't you feel some empathy for the poor guy? He turned good later in the series right? Anyway, Paul's not a bastard, and I don't really like how this story goes... If I was a hater of Paul, which I am not, (he was my first anime crush), maybe I'd like your fanfic, but I'm not, so yeah... that's my critisizm for this fanfic. Please do not take this personally, but I just don't like the way this story goes... Sorry!
| Mach the Slewfoot chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
Ummm.. This is a duplicate of Chapter 2. I'm just pointing it out. It's still funny though.
| Mach the Slewfoot chapter 5 . 11/15/2011
Ouch. That has to hurt!
| Dragon on Vacation chapter 12 . 3/31/2010
this really made my day. Since Paul is so boring and acts like such an ass all the time, it was hilarious to read all those crazy deaths. I really hope you write more chapters. The recurring characters like Big Bubba and the horny ninetales are really funny. XD XD XD
| ObsessedwithBirds chapter 5 . 5/21/2009
XDD this is so funny xD
| Furyfur chapter 6 . 4/5/2009
Gimme a cookie Paul's haters barg in and beat him with a sack of hate mail then he gets hung then run over by a truck but he's still alive so they give hm ice cream and he eats it, its completely normal ice cream, and he dies. ~Furyfur
| Furyfur chapter 5 . 4/5/2009
AHAHAHAHAHA! Make Gary's fangirl's run him over in a very violent way! ~Furyfur
| Furyfur chapter 4 . 4/5/2009
Sick. AWESOME! ~Furyfur
| Furyfur chapter 2 . 4/5/2009
Ooh! I can make that happen! becomes a chef and repeats story That was fun. ~Furyfur
| Furyfur chapter 1 . 4/5/2009