|Reviews for Memories|
| prose.titute chapter 12 . 1/29/2012
"Doctor Who breaks my heart.
And then stomps it into little pieces.
Because it's about the most incredible man, with the most incredible people, and just when you've come to love them...
They change. Or are left behind. Or lose their memories. Or die.
But I can't let go.
Because the Doctor is worth the monsters." - Nice profile, Pelman.
I loved the ending of this. "Two Lives. This is the moment the next one begins." I thought that was beautiful. Thank you for writing this.
| prose.titute chapter 10 . 1/28/2012
"And that was when Martha Jones' life ended."
No no no no NO!
Does that mean she's dead? Because she left the TARDIS? She chose to die, and the Doctor let her leave the Time Vortex and end her life? ARGH!
| prose.titute chapter 8 . 1/28/2012
Ah! Oh my God, I did NOT see that coming! But it suddenly makes sense that that is the direction you would take this story. When I read the first chapter I thought perhaps because of the way the Doctor was thinking that Martha had CHOSEN to not return, but oh my GOD. This death thing is aisagkdjldsgfdjsld!
Okay, next chapter. :)
| prose.titute chapter 2 . 1/28/2012
You have brought up an excellent point regarding the other people who had been aboard the Valiant. That's a good explanation you've come up with.
I am really going to enjoy reading this - I've never found anything like it before.
| sadhappygirl chapter 12 . 1/27/2012
I read this entire story in one go and all I can say is WOW...
Thank you so much for writing this...
| barbara87413 chapter 10 . 12/25/2010
Really enjoyed this! Any chance you might post the last part? Very interesting twist on the original episode!
| serendpettyyahoo.com chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Hello to the Author!
Where's the last chapter, as promised?
I'd really like to read it.
| PhoenixWytch chapter 10 . 9/30/2009
Oh my... Thanks for writing.
| Gamine Madcap chapter 10 . 6/2/2009
Yay updates! Can't wait to see how it ends. Keep up the great work and update soon.
| Iechyd da chapter 10 . 6/2/2009
Very moving chapter. Poor doctor, everyone leaves eventually. Look forward to the final installment.
| Kit-SGA chapter 10 . 6/1/2009
Oh wow what a great chapter... i sure hope it doesn't end this way
| Caellach Tiger Eye chapter 10 . 6/1/2009
The technical, potentially time-altering issues - Martha with UNIT and the Sontaran invasion, the TARDIS no crashing into the 'Titanic' - aside, this is POSITIVELY. BLOODY. BRILLIANT!
I mean it. It is just so much more tear-rending than the last time - Martha didn't get such a tearjerking goodbye with the Doctor (unlike Rose and Donna), but this one feels so fitting. I feel so sorry for both of them. Him, because he lives with the guilt and has an even more painful goodbye with her, leaving him alone AGAIN. Her because her whole self has been shattered by the reality of her death, and she'll probably be a shell of her former self, for the rest of her life.
I ... I have no other words. Well done, I look forward to the last chapter...
gOD ... SPEED ...
| MakeLoveNotSense chapter 10 . 6/1/2009
Dammit, you break my heart. Every single time. There are far too many things right with this to even begin to tell you. But you know you're fantastic, so...
| Gamine Madcap chapter 9 . 5/27/2009
Wow. This is a really great story, and brilliantly played out. Can't wait for more. Keep up the great work and update soon!
| bigbird chapter 9 . 5/24/2009
I keep thinking that you can't possibly top the previous chapter...and then you do! Great characterization, great ideas, great story. You, sir, are a genius!