Reviews for Twinkle Twinkle Little Star
Leah chapter 5 . 1/8
I love you author-chanī¸ Please update
iloveichijo108 chapter 8 . 8/27/2012
for chap 8 : ohhhhhhh...a likye ( rubs hands and laughs evily ) mwhahahahahha! ;)
darkriku47 chapter 2 . 6/27/2012
lol i thought she left her key in the room
Darkkami chapter 14 . 10/29/2011
XD!*falls off bed*XD!
VKLOVER14 chapter 14 . 5/18/2011
i love, love, love this! why havent you updated since 2009?
Takuma-Elisabeth chapter 13 . 5/11/2011
I remember reading this story a while ago and I hoped that it had been updated T.T

I like this story! I wanna see where this all leads to, the whole Lucian and grandmother business and where RinRin is .

Continue please!
MidnightRose93 chapter 10 . 9/7/2010
Ohmigosh soo whan i was reading this chapter i realized that Lucien reminds me of Damon from Vampire Diaries a bit... theyre both so cool :P

Anyways i love your fan fic! :)
Quarter 'till Class chapter 14 . 6/27/2010
luv it luv it luv it! KAWAII! the whole bed scene ;D asum XD
Timekeeper101 chapter 14 . 9/10/2009
I'm definitely enjoying this story so far. Takuma, Aido, and the chairman, especially, seem in-character, and I like how there are a good amount of OCs. You're trying to write an actual story, not a wishy-washy one-copyrighted-character focus (I hope that made sense...). Anyway, just saying, it's great so far; can't wait to see more! :)
azngurl113219 chapter 14 . 8/19/2009
great story luv the end of the ch i was laugh so hard i could barely breath XD
NikkaHi chapter 14 . 8/18/2009
haha... I L.O.V.E. this chapter! :D

It's so good written and is funny yet serious! man you're good!

Plz the next one fast! :D
xXxXMomoXxXx chapter 14 . 8/17/2009
*can't breathe due to the excessive laughing* aw man, the end was AWESOME! Lol Kaoru is so screwed. She's lucky that's not my grandmother. *imagines the biblical and bible banging nagging, lectures, and threats I'd get* Meep...

I can't WAIT to read the next chapter. Great job! -
velvet in glasses chapter 14 . 8/17/2009
Welcome back, I hope you enjoy this review. I loved this chapter! sO funny and sweet
One Bad Wolf chapter 5 . 7/31/2009
i liked it and i didn't think it was really confusing. I didn't mind the jumping from scene to scene. i really hope you write more
Delta Sierra chapter 13 . 6/25/2009
I thought that your story was about how she found out she was part vampire. To be completely honest, your story doesn't have much conflict in it. It rushes from one scene to another and, in honesty, gives me whiplash because I can't tell how any of the scenes are connected. My idea is to make the conflict about kidnapping greater. (if you mentioned that-at this point, I don't remember). I know that I'm not much help, but I also think that detail might make this story more interesting. I feel like I'm not really helping though... it's your story, so I don't really know what to say.
92 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »