|Reviews for Exodus Revoked|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2017
This was a very good, and intriguing start, but apparently you decided to not ever come back to it. If that's the case, please put ABANDONED in the description so people don't expect anything else from you. I know you're still writing (you posted a chapter 2 hours ago) so hopefully you'll see this and either continue the story or modify the descriptor.
| SincereDeceit chapter 1 . 5/2/2015
This was very intriguing. You should consider continuing it when you have the chance it has great promise.
| snixxx69 chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
good start,keep on writing!
| Kash chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
I like it! XD
| TheSwannsSparrow chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
Looks like a good start would like to read more.
| Ryoko05 chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
wow i wonder what this is about. cant wait to find out :)
| apprentice.of.arte chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
Hmm interesting I wonder what the rest of the story will reveal. Can't wait for the next chapter.