Reviews for A Prison Tale
PhiGirl chapter 8 . 3/19/2014
I love your idea of a personified (hope that's the right word) patronus. In fact, I love this whole story :)

Only, how is Snape's decision here any less dependant on chance than it is in canon? It sounds like he wouldn't have done anything (yet?) if Lily hadn't been caught. He definitely needs some kind of catalyst to get him from silently disagreeing with the Death Eaters to actually doing something. Imho the interesting question is whether anything but Lily would have been enough.

Off to read the sequel now ...
MuggleCreator chapter 8 . 12/15/2012
Awwww. Am hurrying on to the sequel now... Good stuff.
Catlady1960 chapter 8 . 8/16/2012
I liked your story very much. Well written.
Saramagician chapter 8 . 4/17/2012
I know I'm posting it late, but I think 'late' is better than never! I just want to say It was amazing! I like it very much!
DarthSmiles chapter 2 . 10/10/2011
Nice writeing, and the mysterious voice is verymysterious
DarthSmiles chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Interesting concept and plot
jkjk chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
I like this alternative situation, but I don't exactly see how it is any different for Snape? After all, he still ended up betraying Voldemort for Lily, because she was in danger. Also I wasn't very convinced by the beginning.. I mean, just the Snape going all Hero on his own part. It is still well written and interesting.

I actually think Snape probably would have stayed a loyal Death Eater without Lily. At that point he didn't know he had anything but enemies on Dumbledore's side and he's not exactly the kind of person who trusts other people's good will. Other than that, he's an extremely unsympathetic man. This though is just speculation. I'll read on to find out how this story goes..
Solas-Divided chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
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AfraidOfFalling chapter 8 . 9/14/2010
Well done! A complex and well-written piece, and very creative. What a fascinating take on the Patronus! And I like how you tie in that most Death Eaters cannot produce them. Vil is one of the only OCs (well, sort of, I suppose really she's a part of Snape, making her not QUITE an OC, but still...) that I've found enjoyable. Good job!
alcocer chapter 8 . 6/18/2010
great story... I like the patronus idea...
Nazgurl chapter 8 . 5/22/2010
Just gotta say - in the prev chap, when Snape summons the lifeboat...that was awesome.
Nazgurl chapter 7 . 5/22/2010
Aha! So she's a patronus! That makes so much more sense now...
Vivid Murk chapter 6 . 5/22/2010
I wonder...the fairy and the tunnel idea. Was that inspiration from some myth or folktale?
Vivid Murk chapter 5 . 5/22/2010
Oh, I love this future Snape! Love how he just banishes the dark hot...
Vivid Murk chapter 4 . 5/22/2010
Very cool. For a moment, I thought he was going into the faerie world, which would have been very cool as well, but this was interesting. Harry, alternate Snape, the realization of a dead Lily, a bit of psychoanalysis...I liked it very much.
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