|Reviews for Sage Among Titans|
| robert krause chapter 1 . 8/12
when in time Naruto the sage had time before he was with the teen titans he had working on ships and find old books to old used pawn shops stuff and selling them too and made money form it too, when he had money form it he get a books shop/pawn shop too ,
| RandomParadox chapter 3 . 8/7
| jlnorris75 chapter 3 . 7/16
Have you ever considered finishing a story
| Luffy chapter 3 . 7/5
Have you ever considered writing a naruto and gurren lagann crossover? Your a great writer and im curious on how your take on it would be.
| robert krause chapter 3 . 6/2
when Naruto and his tame had working no others skills too, when the titans war ship and others things Naruto had get to find when in the army shop in new yoke was long he get to find a army jeep 1940 made us army made and he get made in black and red and it is name ion1 his wife name , when get some ninjas swords 2 of them he then get money back he get a ware house to living when not with the titans tame for when Kitsune nights was it is name now , when he get jinx to be wife now , the 2 had sex and it is no now,
| robert krause chapter 1 . 6/2
when in his home Naruto keep some old 1970-1969 grils like toys to some cars too , when the books shop is a way of buy some old comics books too when he keep a tame pic of 2 of them on desk one is his own tame 7 and the 2 is him when he made it super jon then up to his old sel old rack had , as for the others pics on the wall is of his old home in the ninjas vaillge he get when he marring his 1 wife ion and now she get killer off with her tame 99. all gril tame
| MonkeyDGabry chapter 1 . 6/1
Ok first of all you never explained how Naruto came back to life. Did he become a god or something? You said that he became like the previous Sage of the six paths but unless you have never seen Naruto then you know that's not true.
Secondly, this story felt so rushed, like hey here's naruto, then comes raven, then robin fights, then the fights over. You didn't give any explanations, you didn't expand on anything.
Thirdly, why is Naruto so cringe? Like i felt physical pain when i read the part where you had him going Sherlock Holmes style on Robin. "oh by the way you blink i can deduce you sleep only 3 minutes a night, i can tell you are a waitress, that you have a shitty apartment and that you have family issues". Dude that is really cringe. Like did you reread this stuff? Like not only for the stuff i mentioned but some phrases, while grammatically correct, were put in a bad way. Like in one part you wrote something like " robin was surprised and raven was surprised". 0 flow. You should reread this or get an editor to do it for you.
Sorry if my review sounds harsh, but in your AN at the beginning, you talk shit about other stories of other authors. You should focus on improving yours instead.
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/29
Please continue thinstory.
| SixStringBass chapter 3 . 5/30
Please sir, may I have some more?
| hellfire45 chapter 3 . 5/30
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next
| SPark681 chapter 3 . 5/30
Hmm, nice chapter I wonder what's next anyways keep up the great work!
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/28
happy ten year and two month anniversary
| Autismguy593 chapter 3 . 5/29
I like it, keep up the good work.
| ShiningShadow1965 chapter 3 . 5/29
Ok this os going to be bad well done here bravo.
| ShiningShadow1965 chapter 2 . 5/29
Wonderful chapter i love it so far well done bravo, I onward.