|Reviews for Kitsune Among Titans:Unleashed|
| ShepardisaBOSS chapter 1 . 2/26
Good start. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| BabLe7 chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
was this part of the group of stories you had decided to rewrite or is this just in a period of waiting for an update?
| godzillafan1 chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
seems like an interesting story please write more chapters soon.
| Bladre MKT chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
emmmm not sure where yer going here, so i will stay put and read what you trow at me!
| HowlingWolf14 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
| SomeGuy300 chapter 11 . 3/25/2012
Now I ain't the kind to question you're fics since they are awesome as HELL! But why are you doing the start again man? Just saying since the beginning is a bit more different than from chapter 1. If you can reply back thx.
| The 10th Wand chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
interesting I like the idea there being dimension hoppers that really don't care for the happenings in each world, can't wait to see who Alkino was in the Naruto verse.
| Ccebling chapter 8 . 1/2/2012
Wow is Rose pregnant with Naruto's child? THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!
| chibi doku chapter 2 . 10/9/2011
ya know what i just realized if they call a person who posts negative comments a flamer what do they call a person who posts positive comments an icer?
| gekkokage chapter 10 . 8/11/2011
Great story so far, I like how you got this working out and blended with the other series. I look forward to reading more later.
Now, I get that Nar is actually Shinobi somewhere, and that this other one is a clone? working for chessmaster. My question is if they know the future already within the DC universe, why doesn't Naruto have any plans laid out as well? He should know what happens with his enemies right?
| DEBob19 chapter 8 . 8/9/2011
God I fucking hate time travel. Unless it's a pure time travel fic like Time and Again or Vis a Vis. Makes me want to bash my head against a wall repeatedly.
| Umbra8191 chapter 10 . 8/6/2011
great chapter i can't wait for the next update.
| Silber D. Wolf chapter 10 . 8/6/2011
| aar60493 chapter 9 . 7/20/2011
| NeoNazo356 chapter 7 . 7/16/2011
Here's an idea for an OC. I'll try to make the Bio as detailed as possible. Ahem...
-Chosen Name: Veetoo (pronounced V.2. or V-Two)
-Human Name: While under the guise of a human, his name is Simon (pronounced Shimon)
-Actual age: ?
-Age they appear: 14-15
-Aligment: Neutral (while observing), but close to Good (when the situation calls for it)
-Specific Trope Alignment: Lawful Neutral
-Weapons: A large razor (like the kind used to shave, but a foot thick and three long), with a hook-like extention below the blade so it can be articulated on the finger (is capable of cutting through reinforced steel with enough power backing it up). Carries a modified Pulse Sniper Rifle, that uses a mini arc reactor to generate powerful energy rounds (tunable to either piercing or concussive power).
-Fighting style: Has bellow-Robin-grade martial arts capabilities, but uses inhuman stamina, high pain tolerance levels, and regenerative capabilities to wear enemies down, using a wild (and by default partially unpredictable) fighting style consisting of punches, kicks, knees, elpow strikes, tackles, clawing, and if necessary biting.
-Race/Species: Beastman (Part human, Part Tigershark: Created through clonation, but designed to be able to procreate, unlike other clonated lifeforms before him), and is capable of naturally generating Spiral Energy (a life source that has adapted itself to all sentient beings whose DNA forms a spiraling helix).
-Human Guise: Tan skin, avrage proportions, green eyes, dark messy hair. Khaki cargo jeans, black and red sneakers, red T-shirt with gold slash marks on the front and back. Wears a silver and green-trimmed watch (that generates the Holo-Skin). Choses a form contrasting to his true form as to not be immediately associated with it, as to hide in plain sight.
-Actual Apperance: Angular features, slightly pale caucasian-colored skin, golden eyes with slit-shaped pupils (that don't meet the sclera) that bear cat-like qualities. Slightly enlarged forearms as well as larger hands with beast-like claws. Wears bandages over his forearms where his human skin begins to turn dark green/brown and beastlike. Has dity/bleached blond hair that falls left eye, and doesn't care for excessive grooming, but what is only necessary to keep it clean. His mouth is filled with sharp fangs like a shark's, and he is capable of literally smiling from ear to ear. Wears a brown bodysuit with a silver stripe down the front, two red belts with silver buckles, brown combat sneakers (mix between combat boots and sneakers) with red tips, red-armored shoulder guards, and a brown cloak tattered over the edges.
-Backstory: After many millenia of conflict, humans forgetting how to harness Spiral Power in its truest form, and left to drift off in a planet-sized dreadnaught-class battleship (originally named the Cathedral Terra), Viral, a beastman created by Lordgenome, and given an immortal body that does not require food, sleep, or rest, has worked for centuries to create a Beastman with the same aptitude as humans for generating Spiral Power. Finally, after many years of research through observing the works of various civilizations in secret, as well as his own experimenting, Viral is finally able to create a "son" in a given sense, and while a result of clonation, Veetoo is capable of procreating like a true human and generating Spiral Power. After a lenghty education in most subject of even significant relevance (on a galactic-level educational system), Viral (who has lived for many millenia), has grown bored of the universe as it is, and decided to go into a form of hyper-sleep, leaving his son/creation to go to Earth (once his homeworld), and observe "The Race of the Spiral" in whatever way Veetoo chose: Under the stipulation that should the Anti-Spirals rise again from another Spiral Race, that he be woken up immediately to continue his duty to the spiral races. Otherwise, Veetoo is to leave his creator to his eternal sleep and live his life however he wants it, being urged to find "comrades" that he can rely on.
-Animal Affinity: The Tigershark, "human" in structure, but primal by instinct.
-Homeworld: Was "created" aboard the Chouginga Dai-Gurren (Super Galaxy Dai-Gurren). Is a massive planet-sized dreadnaught-type battle cruiser, capable of transforming into the Chouginga Gurren Lagann (Super Galaxy Gurren Lagann). Is equipped with a Spiral Realm Perceptual Teleportation Device, as well as armaments found on most battleships, only big enough that they'd need their own zip codes. Carries a communicator that allows him to contact it and call it in for "pickup". The ship itself is large enough to comfortably carry several billion people, but teleportation is used as a primary means of transit from one part of the ship to another, since other means would take too long to be effective.
-Body: While his body isn't completely immortal like his creator's (having NOT been disasembled and reassembled on a genetic level until all the "faults" were removed), he has enhanced regenerative abilities, capable of regrowing a lost limb(s) within hours to days of losing it depending on how well-fed he is during his recovery process. Can handle temperature extremes better than humans, though requires protective gear to greater extents like other lifeforms. Eating is optional, due to his body's currently-unknown means of synthesizing nutrients from the air around it (but prefers to eat meat either cooked or freshly killed and doesn't care too much for fruits/vegetables sans apples, carrots, potatoes, and broccoli), and he can go for a month straight without sleeping without any consequence (though requires six hours of sleep at the end of the month), making sleep partially optional. "Rest" is partially optional as well, since he can fight, run, etc. for long periods of time without tiring (upper limits have yet to be thoroughly tested: currently estimated at severl hours). His body is capable of surviving blunt forces and impacts that most humans cannot, and thus he can "take a beating" without too much trouble (it would take the force of a RPM or grenade to cause physical injury, and even that it would have to be pont blank range). Can crush metal with his hands but does not possess the body strength required to do so in large ammounts, and has a 400 lbs bite strength (100 pounds greater than the human peak), and can regenerate lost teeth within minutes dependent on his calcium level (with no indicated limit to the ammount of teeth he can generate). While his claws cannot cut through reinforced steel, they can still rake across substances of greater strength and weaken them considerably. Teeth themselves are capable of cutting through steel, but his body cannot digest it. Aside from that he has average human "specifications", and a disposition for calling those who are "weak" "naked apes". Can break down most poisons, but metal or nanite-based ones will still give him trouble (otherwise organic-based poisons/toxins are broken down). Also possesses the keen senses that feral beasts seem to, and is capable of spotting things a human would overlook.
-Powers: While possessing the strength to bench press a car, as well as inhuman-level of stamina and dexterity (with average levels of flexibility, granted his lithe cat-like frame), he possesses the ability to manipulate Spiral Power (a universal force that itself has evolved to suit the needs of other lifeforms, becoming Mana, Chakra, Ki, etc) in its purest form granted directly from the universe itself (or at least those which spin, which mean ALL spiralling galaxies/universes). Through the use of Spiral Power, one can essentially create matter out of nothingness, bypassing the Law of Conservation of Mass and Energy. However, Veetoo can only access his Spiral Power directly when his life is threatened to the extent where without spiral power, he would perish. With his tigershark-like qualities, he is capable of holding his breath for extended periods, but does not possess gills to draw oxygen from the water. The use of Spiral Energy in the creation of mass is completely up to the user, but is most commonly used for katana or sniper rifles.
-Handicaps/Disabilities: "Rough" attitude towards humans (or "naked apes" as he calls them), but holds some respect for alien species as long as they have some defining feature (all-green eyes, skin of different texture, multiple stomach's, etc.), as well as some for mages. Is difficult to approach, much like his creator before him, Viral.
-Extra Info: Prefers solitude, and uses books to observe the "progress" of humans when not observing them directly.
-Family Members: Viral (Creator/Biological Father)
Anyway, Veetoo (or V2 for short) comes from the TTGL universe and is an Original Character. If you have any questions or need a specific detail, either feel free to ask or fill it in yourself.