Reviews for A Series of Random OneShots
SuperWG chapter 4 . 2/21/2017
Liked it. This reminds me of another story I read and now can't find. Gohan was the main character and 18 was the villain whom 17 defected from. At the end the author said it was supposed to be a 17 and Gohan friendship thing but it hadn't felt like 17 was the co-star, just one of many of Gohan's allies.
SuperWG chapter 1 . 2/20/2017
Lol. But that wasn't supposed to be a surprise, was It? I'm sure she just wants to have dinner with her long lost brother is all.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/28/2016
Would be more interesting if it was teen gohan and present 18 instead
lone ranger22 chapter 22 . 1/27/2016
these one shots are phenomenal especially gohan and 18 pairing and I read your other stories too ,those are awesome too .I don't mean to impose but you should try to develop one of these into a story .keep up the good work
Pizzadude5665 chapter 3 . 12/21/2013
i loved it
The Writing Crow chapter 4 . 6/24/2012
I thought it was pretty cool how some roles were reversed.
The Writing Crow chapter 2 . 6/24/2012
Gohan and Eighteen fucking in front of Goku really sparked my interest, nice job :P
The Writing Crow chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Not gonna lie, that turned me on.
mjmusiclover chapter 26 . 4/13/2012
ahh truly awesome, i love your oneshot series, they're really well done & written :D
Reishin Amara chapter 20 . 4/13/2012
even im hoping u post 'Thirteen' eventually.
Super Vegetarott chapter 26 . 4/12/2012
Good oneshot, maybe you could do a story about the dead Z-team of the future combating Future Cell.
Gohanroxme chapter 7 . 10/29/2011
Lol! Bulma's good news really fit in, but I'm guessing it isn't good so much anymore to Gohan and Trunks.
xWei chapter 7 . 4/24/2010

ginyu like pose! LMAO
Xadro chapter 25 . 11/10/2009
Its certainly interesting as always i enjoy Gohan/18, but if you are going to make a full story of it pelase make Gohan more confident with 18 and real flirting nothing like "However, the moment he said that, he felt like an idiot." thats stupid hes rebelling right so give him a spine and dont make him blush or stutter when hes with girls hes not the original Gohan after all.

And i believe this could be a good story, why not have this a year or 2 sooner and not immediately with romance but just being friends and he moves in with her hides his power from his dad and does some job in the town close by. You can even have 18 have some technical knowledge thanks to Gero so she can make some sort of device that can hide Gohans power, a chip or perhaps a necklace whatever that way he can fight for money, it would be cool. You can even have him save enough money so he can go to school (same as original) and have him flirt with all the girls and be a bad-ass for a change, main pairing would be with 18 off course but you dont have to put them together immediately why not let him have some fun first :D after all hes a teenager lol.

After that you can him off course join the tournament for money etc. Perhaps even have him join a previous tournament so he can kick Satan's ass man i hate that guy lol and off course train his ass off, he and 18 could perhaps make some sort of personal gravity device so they dont need a special chamber for it.

Iunno just throwing out ideas, which sound sood to me

- xadro
Xadro chapter 24 . 11/10/2009
Lol xD this one is pretty useless lol nothing changed really, but it did show how SuperSaiyans work i guess but for the rest it was well useless lol bit funny though
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