Reviews for I'll Miss YouEdxWin
Hellocloser chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
This is great ! The only thing i can say about it is you should've had Ed explain why he couldnt stay , or atleast have Winry ask about it . Also you could've dragge out the reunion process a bit . Maybe had Ed stay with Winry and their daughter for a bit before they told her Ed was her father . Also her reaction probably would'vr been a little skeptical . But other then that , cute little oneshot (:
PeAceLovEr 12 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
aww its very nice!
Indigo99 chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Goddamn,girl, you write so well!

I haven't been into FMA for awhile now, but I had to take a look.

You're writing/dialouge is just gorgeous. And I wouldn't say that if it wasn't true. I'm a pretty critical person... XD
Automailjunkie44 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
Very cute though the ending of this chapter was alittle rushed but still cute :) You should totally write more to this fic :)
Soul of Shaman chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
*hugs your head and turns away, holding hand in fist* BEAUTIFUL!
aliasaurorasaccounthasmoved chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Hard to believe Elda's reaction to finding out she actually has a father after all these years. If she were more like Ed, I think she'd've been more of a grudge holder, like Ed was with -his- father. But of course a surly child would have ruined the tone of the story, so I forgive you.