|Reviews for Already Dead|
| LoveAngel91 chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
loved it! it was awsome!
| xXxhurting-insidexXx chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
i thout it was kinda funny at the end where it was like
clock tower. death. happiness. bella. in my arms. ...it was funny...anywho i loved it!
| Chi0075 chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
VERY beautiful poem!
| tears will fall chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
that was amazing *sniffles*
the poem was great, although its sad did you write it for some reason
anyways if you have time check my oneshot out its called the loss of a loved one
| emmieeann chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
that was amazing! i really loved it. even though the ending was happy, this was still pretty sad!
*gasp* poor cullens! and charlie, and jacob! but this is still happy too anyway haha. great job i loved this!
| 0Sweetpea0 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
HA! i knew edward would go to heaven
| EdwardIs4Me chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
| banditlover chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
this story was pretty good. it made me sad but i'm glad Edward and Bella ended up together again. the poems were really good, but at first i was confused as to where Bella's poem ended. it sounded like "Blind pain pierces my stomach again and i doubled over in sobs." was a line from the poem and then the rest of it didn't make sense. but then i read it again and i realized that line was what edward was feeling and the rest of it was like Edward's poem. if you could find a way to separate the end of Bella's poem from what edward was feeling, that would be great. my only other complaint is that the reasons you gave edward for why he left Bella were completely off the mark. edward has always loved bella and always will love her. He left her to protect her, not because he was confused and thought he didn't love her anymore.
| Crazy Twilight Lover chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
This is so adorable, and very well written. I like the poem!
| twilight1001 chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
you shuld write more!
| Dazzled For Eternity chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
that is really good! i luv it a lot. :D
| xoxsars1731 chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
i really like this! its morbid and sad but it just makes me want to read more! please continue!
| twilightobbsessedandproud chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
ome ome ome that was awesome! i cried! its awesome!
| browneyes13 chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
I LOVED IT
the end )