|Reviews for One First of Many|
| VortexWithAnEnd chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
Aww man! This was adorable! :D
| hpsslily chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
What a brilliant one shot!:):):)
| sexy-biker-voice chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
It's a good story, but I think the constand "HAAAARSH" and "KKKTCHHOOO" and such is a bit childish. That's just my opinion, I just prefer to read stories that use descriptive "He sneezed" rather than writing a sound effect.
| JayJay133 chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
This is so sweet! I almost cried, it's so wonderful!
| LovelySinner7 chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
| reader1writer1 chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
That's really sweet :)
| oakleaf chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
Merry Christmas! Have a review!
Anyway, great story. I really enjoyed how you've written it. The plot's great and you generally done a great job. Well done!
| Haunt of twilight chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
wow! I love it. These are always great to read, you really did a unique spin on it. great story.
| Lady Gaidin chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Great fic! Solid insecurities. Cute family moments.
| xDarklightx chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
I like it. It is really good.
| snapelover9 chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
this fic was very OOC so much so it was almost AU-ish. but none the less i loved it!
| APWBD chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
This was a really lovely little story. Thanks for writing it.
| CrayonsPink chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
GREAT job! I LOVE this story!
| MaritimeStars chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
This was good story. Thanks for sharing :-)
| swrfjackson chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
this was really good, i liked it a lot