Reviews for Parents
Wolf chapter 8 . 1/17/2014
ok, with all the effort you put into chapter one, the rest of these dispte the details are disappointingly short.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/17/2014
Actualy in most western cultures they belive that Pregnancy is more a total of Ten months. don't ask me why or how that works, but there you have it
Reading Nut Cassirole chapter 25 . 4/2/2013
interesting... very interesting. i wasnt expecting it to go like that. it worked :) i thought it was really good and enjoyed reading it

keep up the good work :)
Karatekid-Ninja chapter 25 . 1/9/2010
hey that was a great fanfiction and i think that the story line or plot was a good and fair twist to the story i just have 1 problem you put sakura and naruto together, everyone knows it is hinata and naruto and saskue and sakura any way other then that ui can't wait to read more of your fan-fics i just hope that you enjoy writting these cause i hope that they never stop sorry just did you no that some one wrote a 170 chapters on Shikamaru and Temari (they have a lot of time on there hands) any way i hope to read more soon

bye XD
sweetD87 chapter 12 . 6/30/2009
this story is so great. writr
acereyis chapter 5 . 5/17/2009
No No No! how can u put naruto and sakura together?

btw naruto and hinata gets together in the shippudden series.
xXYamchaXx chapter 25 . 5/15/2009
it is ok, but it got really inconsistent as far as chapters went, also some like chapter 21 were far to short. Also, you depended on dialogue far to much. Still, it was an ok read overall.
xXYamchaXx chapter 19 . 5/3/2009
While it is are areas you need to improve a good amount, this story was a pretty good read, and a decently interesting one as well.
Lupita chapter 17 . 4/30/2009
kool cnt wait 4 the next chapter i hope u feel like updating soon its good i wonder if the demons get out any who its good keep writing -
OTURAN IKAMUZU chapter 17 . 4/30/2009
WOW!

AWSOME FIC!

TAKE YOUR TIME IN UP DATING AND MAKE A GOOD LONG CHAPTER!

BUT DON'T TAKE TOO LONG!

OR I'LL HAVE TO KILL YOU!

BRUTLEY.
Lupita chapter 15 . 4/26/2009
its getting good who new sasuke had a kid mayb u could add a lil more detail everyting iz happening kinda of fast buts its good the plot iz update soon -
Lupita chapter 13 . 4/25/2009
nice story so far i like it update soon please i wanna no is sasuke gets 2 join his old village again also mayb the chapters could b a lil longer anyway like how the kids r grown up now lol -
KoalaSnow chapter 11 . 4/21/2009
im enjoying this so much!
sweet-hinatachan123 chapter 9 . 4/18/2009
aw that was so cute, please continue XD
Lupita chapter 9 . 4/18/2009
aww how cute poor gaara he had his 1st diaper change lol dat wuz funny good story but mayb the chapters could b a lil longer other than dat its good -
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