This was very interesting. I really liked it. I hope you'll choose to continue this because so far, I love Edward's character and the whole situation. I'm also really curious about how Bella loses Edward..

This story should most definitely be updated, it's too good of a start I have to know what happens next.

This seems like a promising story. Why hasn't it been continued?

Ohshit this was really good. the two really looked and sounded like a bunch of 16yr old in the first part. and during bella's point of view way to work up the suspence. keep up the good work and post more soon!

You have me intrigued. I'm looking forward to more, and am glad I stumbled upon this story.

What happened? Hope you update because this is interesting.

Continue this soon! Are you going to go back to before her life was screwed up, or start after and her trig to fix it? And what happened? I'm intrigued so update soon!

I see that it's been months since you've posted this and i just wanted to say how intrigued i am by just the first chapter alone! I hope you plan on updating! I hope to get an e-mail alert soon..you're in my faves! :-)

I'm hoping for some more from this story. I noticed you haven't added anything since this original chapter.

This beginning sounds so promising. I really do hope you continue this.

Hey.

I am amjorly intrigued! I love the way you set out Bellas part, and I love love love your Edward!

Ooh, i can't wait. )

And I Love their interaction!

Oh, it's gonna be awesome. )

Love,

elliexoxoxoxoxoxox

this was amazing,

and intruiging (:

i spelled that wrong

lmao oh well

please update soon!

Interesting beginning. I hope you're continuing this storyline. There are so many unanswered questions in the BPOV that make me want to know. So, hopefully you will decide to continue with this fic.

Sorry I'm a crap reviewer. I haven't read any of your other stuff but I will try after reading this.

I like the way it is written, the beginning is intriguing enough for me to put it on alert. My only concern is that maybe you aren't continuing it or it is going to update really slowly. I understand that RL interferes but in that case I prefer to wait a while until the story is complete, because I'm an impatient bitch.

Thank you for sharing and I do hope this continues.

:)

I actually really enjoyed this. Hopefully this story isn't over before it's begun!