Reviews for Once Upon A Time You Asked Me To Dance
Willofthewisp chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Interesting, although I do think Jack would definitely feel something dancing with his Lizzie. But you depicted the confusion and conflict she would feel perfectly and I do love the image of them dancing on the deck. That would have been so lovely to have seen onscreen. It's also interesting you include Will here, very brave choice, but well done. It's typical he wouldn't see anything going on between them. No, it takes a full-out KISS for that to happen, lol! Very original work.
FirstMateBunny chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
I have loved this story for a while now and up till a few hours ago I already thought I'd reviewed it! The last line is really good, the slight rhyming of no and Sparrow is awesome! Keep up the good work :)