Reviews for Showing Off
AFgurl chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
This was a decent enough tale. I wish it was longer and had more detail.
Chickstar merline chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Like it a lot !
Torgetta chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
This was a very nice and enjoyable read. Thank-you
liberal4peace chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
I wonder if vampires feel pain...
staretoile chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Hello Jamie,

interesting story. Edward really should not show off because

Carlisle is right, the more Edward shows off, the more will

Bella want to be a vampire. So now both teenagers are grounded

that sounds fair to me.

Greetings,

Andrea
NaughtyAngelBrat chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
I really liked this one, Jaime. I know it is hard for guys to NOT show off for their girls. It is a practice that goes back to the dawn of time. So I can't fault Edward for that.

Disrespect to one's parents, on the other hand, is something that can't be allowed.

Hugs, Che'
PuppyBeBad chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Edward is such an overdramatic teenager well Carlisle is such a good dad

Great stort :)
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Ooooopppppppps!
TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
A great story. Very well written.
nelluca chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
I thought that I already reviewed that story, but whatever!

Congraulations ! GREAT STORY!
angelspike55 chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
good story
Cullen Cousin chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
great story!
Mirkwood Tourist chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
I just LOVE Carlisle and he was just wonderful in this story! He is just THE greatest dad!
caughtforCarlisle chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
I love this story. You should write more where Carlisle has to pull rank in his house. Good Job
TwilightGuru09 chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Very Good story. I like reading about the perpetual teenager stuck at 17. I also like the loving relationship between Carlisle and Esme. another for the Fav. I like to reread the good ones.
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