|Reviews for Bound|
| mckertis chapter 37 . 8/13
I couldnt be bothered reading this, just skimmed several chapters, and apparently Sirius wants to marry a child...err, no thanks, now i REALLY dont want to read this.
| SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 7/22
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2015
Okay, I just finished the first chapter and while I totally enjoy your writing style and creativity concerning swear words, I can't bring myself to read more, sorry. But Sirius Black, the Sirius Black, one of the marauder ringleaders, high of cool, Mr handsomely bored himself would not pay attention to a first year, maybe help her by listening and then making her laugh on a good day. He probably would get Remus or someone else to deal with first year tears. I also doubt he would get this... focused on any girl, but especially an eleven year old kid. Sirius turned 22 around the time he was arrested, meaning your Sirius will be fifthteen in a few weeks. The girls he would grace with his presence would be snogging age, to be crude. Also your awen is a little bit too grown up for a first year and her sudden changes from shy to James Potter teasing bold are not very believable. Sorry.
I really like the way you write, I adored Lilys pov and how you hinted about her family situation, therefore I am a little upset that your main charas are not really convincing to me :'(
| Guest chapter 37 . 5/11/2015
This was amazingly great. Long, but great!
| lils18 chapter 37 . 2/20/2015
i know that you probably don't write fanfiction anymore and probably wont see this but i thought i'd let you know that your stories are amazing, i have read this series 3 times over and i love more every time, when i think of sirius black, amongst all other pairings, i think of anwen. anyway i just thought i should finally drop off a letter and tell you this, so thats for creating one of the best couples in my imagination! and all your stories are gorgeous! xxx
| ShadowTeir chapter 37 . 12/5/2014
Hi completely random but i was listening to the song you'll be in my heart and thought i would be the perfect song for Anwen and Sirius, just had to put it in the comments before i bust.
| pleurocoelus chapter 12 . 6/10/2014
" one of James cousins was feeling poorly, and several of the family members were concerned. "
That's the kid who puked on Peter in Just One Happy Day, Together! Sorry. Just realized that.
| CentaurPrincess chapter 37 . 7/7/2013
| Marauder52611 chapter 11 . 6/9/2013
Ok, the story is ok. But you're making Anwen a total Mary Sue! I mean depressive much! I really don't mean this as anything bad, but every time she falls into depression everyone else is in a bad mood! Also she has way too many advanced classes, and McGonagall TEACHING someone to be an Animagus?! She would NEVER do that! Once again, this is just constructive criticism, my stories seem Mary Sueish too, but I am doing my best to fix it. I've only read 10 chapters, and while I'm pretty sure you are trying to make her less of a Sue, there's still some stuff you need to work on. Btw, once again I don't mean any of this in a bad way, and this is not a flame. This is just an honest review. Anyways, other than the Sue problem, I think your story is pretty cool!
| RedPenWriter13 chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Anwen has successfully wrapped the amazing Sirius Black around her little fingers in one chapter. I like this girl! RPW13
| FirePhoenix86 chapter 36 . 7/31/2012
Wow. I must admit, I was having a hard time getting into this story at first. I was, at first, a little wary of the relationship between Anwyn and Sirius, then there was the whole first person narrative that switched between characters. Then, probably around Sirius' graduation I was pretty much hooked.
I would also say that having so many years go by in one novel-sized story was probably a bit much. I might have cut this one into 2 stories right around Anwyn's graduation. There's just so much stuff in this story.
Aside from that I absolutely loved it! You need more reviews on this story, so I'm going to recommend it to my readers when I post my next chapter. Sorry I didn't review more chapters, I tend to get sucked into the stories I read and forget to review. Maybe one day I'll re-read and leave more reviews for this story. I'll leave more reviews on the next part.
| Guest chapter 36 . 7/16/2012
Love love LOVE this story! I love Anwen's character, and I love how Sirius and she are suited for each other!
| brooke13243546 chapter 11 . 6/15/2012
I'm in love with this story. You've created such a lovley character and I just love her. Great job! :D
| GinnyPotter12488 chapter 7 . 1/17/2012
| breeziegirll chapter 4 . 12/22/2011
I have decided to read this story again and i now notice how Anwen is so similar to me. All except I cannot sing for the life of me and I'm really tall... it's so cool reading a story with some one who is so similar to me(: I have to say this has to be one of may favorite stories ever(: great job~breeziegirll