Reviews for The Beginning of a Wonderful Life
kitty wicca chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
I like you pen name. :)
embraced-by-darkness chapter 2 . 4/13/2009
that was pretty good; although it sounds a little more like they are in high school vs college
emsoreoangel chapter 2 . 4/5/2009
I agree with you. This chapter is a bit cheesy, but every story needs some of that to keep the story going. I will be interested to see where you take us in your story.
Orphan Account 17 chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
Matt, and possibly Mary, was already born when Eric was 23. :)

Annie and Eric would've been out of college by 23 and already married (with one/two kids).

But this is a good start. Maybe you can make Eric and Annie four or five years younger to begin with.
emsoreoangel chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Hm...this is rather interesting. I am not sure what to make of the story yet. I am intrigued though and can't wait for you to update again. Great job!