Reviews for Breathe
FallenAngel218 chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
I like it when the boys comfort each other. :) Good stuff!
sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
oh wow, how heart wrenching. What Sammy must have been going through in those few seconds!
IheartSam7 chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
awesome awesome awesome awesome
NC Girl chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Wow...

You did an amazing (and I don't use that word lightly) job with this. I could feel Sam's desperation and panic as well as Dean's need and determination to stop it. Really well written!
Soncnica chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
This hurts...but in a good way!

Poor Sam just didn't want to let go...
DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Dean is such a good big brother! Lovely. Bev xx
CatBeist chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
good job
Miyo86 chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Man, even almost drowned Dean is still the one comforting Sam. That's why HE is the big brother Awesome job.
PlatinumRoseLady chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
So powerful and just beautiful.
Nana56 chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Beautiful! Absolutely perfect!
Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Brilliant!

And you win the award. Because I read this when it was, like, 200 words, and that takes talent to boil it down to its essential parts and end up with 100 words of brilliance.

Very emotionally charged and all in line. I felt Sam's panic and can imagine Dean's need to comfort Sam even as he is only figuring out for himself what is going on.

Kudos.
InSecret chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
*gulps*

Ah, intense. And awesome. And intense.

*nods*
writergirl94 chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
awe!

soo brotherly.
Orange Autumn chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
So heartwrenching and just wow! I really, really loved this one. I am awwing and awwing, haha. Hugs for the boys, and hugs for you!
PADavis chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Beautiful baby - just beautiful.

Phoebe
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