|Reviews for Alice in Wonderland|
| tennisgurl13 chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
OMG! THAT WAS AMAZING! I LOVE HOW YOU MIXED SOME OF TWILIGHT'S VAMPIRES WITH HANSLE AND GRETEL! REALLY AMAZING AND CREATIVE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
OH I'M SORRY ABOUT UR GREAT AUNT :(
| Uns33n.Unkn0wn chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
What a dramatic ending to a good chapter. I liked it. It was very different. Update soon.
| Reigh Lyn chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
wow! that was... wow! i loved it (:
| Homegrl aka Amanda chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
2 chapters and you have over 100 reviews I knew this would be good...
and I was right cause this story has me interested.
can't wait for the next one
| masen13 chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
great start to this story! i love the ending of chapter 2.
p.s. my condolences towards you and your family on the loss of your great aunt. God bless.
| Mona-the-Lisa chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
Wow, I gotta admit, you can just throw these original stories out of no where and make them awesome.
Alice and Wonerland with vampires- how did you ever come up with something like that? lol
Great chapter as always )
| JK5959 chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
This was a great chapter. Was not expecting the dead bodies in the cottage, though I had a sneaking suspicion that something was dead in there, but not children. However, you did warn us that this was going to be a dark story. I absolutely love it. Keep up the great work.
Also, I'm very sorry to hear about your great aunt. My thoughts sand prayers go out to you and your family.
| jaydubb chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
and well written.
but i suppose that's the only way you do things, DLC.
...oh golly, i'm so tempted to call you Daddy..
| brandis chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
i love this! i'm seriously so excited for this story.
| writingxonxwalls chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
Amazing update! Loved the suspense at the end.. What shall Alice do! And much love to you about your aunt:[
| Nikkitaa chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
That was great. So gload you got it out. Hope your finger feels better :)
| toastloaf93 chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
awesome chapter update soon please
i'm sorry about you great aunt
| twilightislame chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
This story is really interesting... I like it! Horrible place to stop though. Great Chapter!
Keep Writing. Update Soon.
| kimjhee chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
I really enjoyed reading this chapter, it was so good. I especially love where you're going with this. I was more than shocked when I read the last sentence. I literally had my jaw hanging open. Haha.
| VampiresaInShadows chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
Just one thing:
I love Jasper! w
I think this story is really great :)