Reviews for Cloud in your mind
Layla347 chapter 22 . 12/20/2015
Nicely done:)
Leah Tatyana Nicole chapter 22 . 2/20/2013
I love jake and mia update soon n i kinda think u should add another lemon and make jake jealous
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 22 . 12/21/2011
i loved it! can't wait for more!
randompersoneatingpie chapter 19 . 12/31/2010
kAsS3695 chapter 22 . 5/12/2010
love your story

please post more soon
lovelyvampire93 chapter 22 . 3/8/2010

erica3769 chapter 22 . 2/23/2010
I really like this story and how you are showing the had time with the mystical world in La Push and Forks. I noticed you haven't updated in a really long time. I hope you finish this story!
Cherry-Blossom-Kunoichi chapter 22 . 12/22/2009
This story is amazing! :) I feel a little sad that ive read all 22 chapters in less than a day ;) Cant wait for the next chapter.
LuckySock chapter 22 . 11/27/2009
I love the story!

Update soon please!
MysteryGirlxx chapter 22 . 9/23/2009
aww! theyre just too cutee! haha.. write moree!

OniLilith chapter 22 . 9/1/2009
OMG please update i would like to know what happen next please. Keep up the good work.
Straight Edge Queen chapter 22 . 6/26/2009
I LOVE this story! PLEASE continue!
Twilightrox1296 chapter 5 . 6/24/2009
This is a great story.

I read it a long time ago.

Jacob is Ok.



You know whats funny.

I found this fanfic on an IMDB link in like April.

Thats how I discovered this site.
aqua543 chapter 22 . 6/9/2009
I love this story. it's well written. i love it. update soon, please.
BrinaaBean chapter 22 . 6/5/2009
I LOVE your story!

It's basically the PERFECT OC for Jacob. I've not yet read Breaking Dawn, and frankly, I'm glad. I don't want to see my Jacob imprint. ):

I'm SO looking forward for your next update.
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