Reviews for Want to Be Close
Ashleythetiger chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
cute very cute

good story
The Genius Mage chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
... . This is so beautiful I don't even know where to start! This is how first person should be written! It was beautiful sweet and romantic without being...without being TOO much so. It was wonderful. Thank you for the breathtaking read.
JustPikachu chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
;o; This is...;o;

I like the way you summarize their relationship in such a short paragraph yet, the reader still understands how important it is for Souji and Yukiko.

The idea of late night visits where they just sat in silence and enjoy each others' presence was a really smart idea. :)

I hope to see another SoujixYukiko fanfic from you! (and I agree. Too much Naoto lovers out here D:)
Shade the Raven chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Cute and brillant, all in one neat little package. Amazing piece!
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
UWE HE HE, I TOTALLY AGREE WITH YOU, THIS IS ONE OF THE SWEETEST ONE SHOTS TO A GAME I HAVE EVER READ, GOOD JOB, HOPE YOU MAKE MORE SOUJIxYUKIKO LIKE THIS, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Twotwentytwo chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
How did I miss this?

I admit to being a Souji/Naoto fanboy, but Souji/Yukiko's a close second. Souji/Rise is fun too, and Souji/Chie is direly lacking around here.

So yeah, good work in spreading the love. :)
thesavorofpan chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
This is just an awesome story! You did a wonderful amazing job! I really like how you put it into a first person perspective on it. I can actually imange them too actually doing that
Aruta Rianu chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
This story is pretty amazing; It seems like that none o the two characters are OOC at all and with that, I salute you. No, seriously. Some of the SoujixYukiko fanfics in here are... kinda... well... I don't know how to describe it, but...

Yeah, you get my point. _

And it's also very likely that the two of them would do something like this after everything, don't you think? I see this pairing as the "Royal Sensual Romantic Type", and you totally hit the spot.

Too bad they stopped when "her back touches the floor". Ufufufufufu... lmao, kidding.

Although a *cough* continuation would be nice. *winks* If you're up to it, I guess.

There are just a few minor typo errors that I found, but it's most likely caused by the MS Word functions/dictionary and grammar checking stuff... So you don't really have to bother. We understand it anyway

Well anyways, thanks for patiently reading my review. Congratulations for a job well done. O

We'd be expecting your other fanfictions in the future. ;D
Reaper's Shadow chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
Good stuff! And you're right, there are not nearly enough stories about this couple. Please continue!
fox-white-moon chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
hai

thank god finally new fanfic about SoujixYukiko pairing

there are to many SoujixChie, SoujixNaoto (there are too many kind fanfiction for this pairing) and SoujixRise. (I did not read all this pairing except only SoujixYukiko fanfic)

it kind of frustrated because it only 4 or 5 fanfic for SoujixYukiko. (this is to frustrated situation)

I want to laugh about Souji has to sneaked secretly from his uncle house to meet Yukiko.

please updated more about SoujixYukiko romantic moment.

I will cheer you!

GoOd LuCk
aimakichan chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
That was beautiful. To be honest, I don't usually like it when authors write in first person, but this totally WORKED. I love how you took such care with every small detail and every one of Souji's thoughts. And best of all, it's Souji/Yukiko, which we can always do more of! Keep up the awesome work! Hope to see more in the future! :D