Reviews for That Perches In The Soul
Random Ruth chapter 2 . 7/20/2014
Wow that was epic - such a great idea! I can imagine Jared, Jensen and Misha acting this one out. Lucifer!Dean is creepy, and the way you describe how he physically changes is creepy. And it's left open for more...
shookenuppepsi chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
Good god, the angst. Cas possessing Sam is bizarre yet awesome. And your depiction of Lucifer is fantastic. I love Sam's hatred of the idea of being the Last Winchester, especially when it means Dean has to die.
juppschmitz chapter 2 . 4/2/2012
WHAT DO I HAVE TO DO TO MAKE YOU CONTINUE THIS?

Also, are you on LJ?

Commenting is so much nicer there...
borgmama1of5 chapter 2 . 9/13/2011
What a devastating version of events! I need to know what happens, even though I fear I will sob my eyes out at the end, given how much I have cried reading this much.
ccase13 chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
This is a very interesting and dark AU where Dean makes the sacrifice to fall to Lucifer and leaves Sam and Castiel as one body to fight Lucifer.
MeAzrael chapter 2 . 2/12/2011
Here I am again - and first of all: thanks to PADavis, because obviously without her I wouldn't have had the pleasure to read your second chapter, though it would've been even more wonderful to have even more chapters of that story!

Huge comeback of the "then" and "now" with a little flashback into the past. "You can't change who you are, Sammy." John smiles again, quick and sad. "You can only be you." Sounds obvious, but there's so much meaning in it...

And when it comes to the moment of decision, in the circle, all sounds around dying - this is how it should have been, in the show, just that it's impossible to be so intense on the screen, but it is on paper, and you did it. And I've read some possessed Dean and Sam, but you're take the cake, really. Pretty creepy meeting here, between two sets of brothers, Dean and Sam, Lucifer and Cas - exciting!

And another flashback to Bobby (most wonderful guy ever) and Sam, and again it's such an artful connection to the "now", to WHO the Winchesters really are, and what can I say? "He could say that there's nothing Sam can do about it, now or ever, and no matter what he does or where he runs, there's no escaping this kind of love." Yeah, exactly. Simple as that. It hurts.

Absolutely loved the battle at the graveyard - so cool, so dry, so thrilling - funniest thing ever. And now would've been the time to end it... sniff! I would have loved to read your last chapter. If you're ever in the mood to go back in time and write it - please tell me. You never know - a muse can do weird things to a writer.

At least there's solace in the knowledge that you've written another loooooooong and obviously hugely reviewed story, and that's the one I'm going to read next.

Thanks a lot for sharing - I enjoyed it very much!

xxx Kate
MeAzrael chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Hey, I happened to stumble over your story - and hey, it's just incredible awesome! I can't believe only 13 people reviewed it - so the least I can do is leave a review myself.

First of all: loved the poem - so sad, and yet... hope never dies. Perfect beginning, with the sweet little girl that turns out to be Lilith (and once again I loved the casting of the show - little Lilith was just smashing). Your alternate "now" and "then" works wonderful, and Dean in the hospital after the fight with Alistair is one of my favorites. Your approach to Sam is perfect - that's the two-souled guy, loving his brother and cheating on him so very bad, so sure to do the right thing and failing so awfully. Loved that part of the show as much as I hated it ;-)

I'm totally in awe about your writing style - every line is a pleasure to read. You totally nailed every character, adding wit and humor and deepness to it. "Yeah, well, that's what happens when you're God's bitch," his brother says bitterly." Seriously? Awesome.

Creepy little scene with Lilith and the circle of bodies around her - and Sam so ambiguous about how he should feel...

And again back in the hospital - heartbreaking, Sam yearning to save Dean by all means - and Dean knowing that it's all heading south, not able to stop it...

Then your "now" and "then" nearly collapsing until it's all now... and Cas possessing Sam and Dean preparing to do what he's always done, save his little brother - too bad that I can't find the right words, but this is brilliant, and even Cas is so much... Cas :-) You left me with my jaws hanging to the ground.

xxx Kate
anon chapter 2 . 7/5/2009
I have really enjoyed this story. I can't wait to see how it ends. Thanks for sharing.
winchesterfan chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
Please finish this story - very good job and I would really like to see how you resolve it.
Ster1 chapter 2 . 4/27/2009
Cas preening! BWAH! That's hysterical!

Man, Lucifer is one scary dude here. (Oh, and thanks for killing off Ruby so nicely *g*). Love how he has Dean's snark but his ruthlessness...oh my. And poor Sam, now having to deal with that. The situation looks pretty dire! *bites nails*

Another great chapter- I just love your writing!(and maybe we'll get another chapter for "Memory" soon? Not that I'm greedy...oh, who am I kidding? I'm greedy as all heck!)
Ster1 chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
Hey, I just realized you're started another fic! Awesome!

Oh, cripes...what a heartbreaking scenario. But so fitting for what Dean would want-to allow himself to be the sacrifice, not Sam. And you did such a terrific job getting into S4 Sam's mindset. Definitely not an easy task! Kudos on a great chapter-now off to read the next...
shesamonster chapter 2 . 4/27/2009
This chapter was literally my favorite thing ever! Zombies playing baseball? Skeleton babies? This is good writing f I've ever seen it!

Please update again soon! :D
Zatnikatel chapter 2 . 4/27/2009
Wow, hope you're going to make this a multi-chapter... love it so far. I too have a gut feeling Krispe is going to bait and switch us on who the vessel might be... :-O
lime juize chapter 2 . 4/27/2009
OMFG This chapter is AWESOME! I love Love LOVE it. Lucifer/Dean just rocks my socs. He brings fun, terror, and zombies to the apocalypse. He also is a great blend of Dean and Lucifer. Castiel preening after Sam calls him a badass just...*hugs*. I love the scene with Bobby it really adds to the chapter. OK I have to say this one more time Lucifer/Dean ROCKS! Please update soon!
PADavis chapter 2 . 4/27/2009
I like being responsible for this - not a problem. I'm so glad you did the late night writing thingy. I like the flashbacks very much - interesting counterpont to the action with Lucifer, and the zombie scene made me snort with laughter. Wonderful Lucifer in Dean.

Oh - and sure enough, rumors flying around that this could be how the season ends. Have Lucifer take Sam is what we are all expecting after all - he goes Dark, Satan, yada yada, and while that could still happen, I'm rooting for Dean. LOL

PHoebe
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