Reviews for Beating The Odds
ivanganev1992 chapter 6 . 9/29
ch 6

Idiotic devil's lepricon luck .
za worlda chapter 16 . 7/19
rock lee sex style taijutsu evening elephant
my 2 guys chapter 7 . 7/7
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 6 . 7/7
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 7/6
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 7/6
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 7/6
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 7/6
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 7/6
that was good keep the chapters coming
Zakimam6outlook.com chapter 1 . 7/5
Gg
Ibskib chapter 2 . 5/8
Just because an author is writing about a lucky character, doesn't mean they should rely on luck instead of thorough proofreading when writing.

Considering some of the really obvious typos I've seen, I doubt this chapter has been proofread at all, or at least not particularly well.
Ibskib chapter 1 . 5/8
Correction:
If Kami - If that kami

Kami doesn't mean God with capital G, a common western mistake spirit/spirits come closer in meaning, there is really no primary deity in Shinto, though Amaterasu comes the closest.

Of course it might just have been an incomplete sentence, it's far from the only one, I would suggest getting a beta, or to spend more time proofreading, preferably both:

call Iruka-sensei - call me Iruka-sensei

raised a hand enough to see - raised a hand high enough for him to see

He could of introduced - He could have introduced

good enough to make them - good enough reason to make them

all of them still conscious - all of those still conscious

shake hands an - shake hands and

the attackes were coming - the attacks were coming

as Kyuubi reborn - as the Kyuubi reborn
Spidey2 chapter 29 . 3/30
Love it! Keep going!
Guest chapter 7 . 9/7/2015
Half of this story makes no sense even for a fanfiction
Orange Waterblade chapter 4 . 7/5/2015
I know I'm biased and that I dont really love hinata coughBitchcough but there's one thing I dont understand. Who decided that there will be a marriage between naruto and hinata? For Hinata i can understand with the clan and her parents but for Naruto his parents are dead,he has no legal guardian to make the decision for him, he's not part of a clan and the hokage cannot even order him to because he is just a bloody civilan
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