Reviews for Beating The Odds
nitewolf423 chapter 29 . 7/29
Its okay. Are they still with naruto cause you never explianed that
salasdaniel74 chapter 15 . 6/14
Mother say what?
salasdaniel74 chapter 3 . 2/27
... I know I would know later, but... how? (Kyuubi&Anko, mate/who).
ivanganev1992 chapter 6 . 9/29/2016
ch 6

Idiotic devil's lepricon luck .
za worlda chapter 16 . 7/19/2016
rock lee sex style taijutsu evening elephant
my 2 guys chapter 7 . 7/7/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 6 . 7/7/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 7/6/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 7/6/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 7/6/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 7/6/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 7/6/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
Zakimam6outlook.com chapter 1 . 7/5/2016
Gg
Ibskib chapter 2 . 5/8/2016
Just because an author is writing about a lucky character, doesn't mean they should rely on luck instead of thorough proofreading when writing.

Considering some of the really obvious typos I've seen, I doubt this chapter has been proofread at all, or at least not particularly well.
Ibskib chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
Correction:
If Kami - If that kami

Kami doesn't mean God with capital G, a common western mistake spirit/spirits come closer in meaning, there is really no primary deity in Shinto, though Amaterasu comes the closest.

Of course it might just have been an incomplete sentence, it's far from the only one, I would suggest getting a beta, or to spend more time proofreading, preferably both:

call Iruka-sensei - call me Iruka-sensei

raised a hand enough to see - raised a hand high enough for him to see

He could of introduced - He could have introduced

good enough to make them - good enough reason to make them

all of them still conscious - all of those still conscious

shake hands an - shake hands and

the attackes were coming - the attacks were coming

as Kyuubi reborn - as the Kyuubi reborn
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