Reviews for Meeting Bella
chloe chapter 1 . 1/18
i love twilight CAN U PLEASE MAKE ANOUTHER MOVIE PLEASE IM GOING TO CRY
Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
I love how you've combined the book scene with the movie scene. This was really great; made me laugh!
Zz4567 chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Its not even how they meet in the books
Melinda the Proud Bookworm chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
This is the kind of fan fiction I just hate to read. It is a scene from the movie, typed out. A few words being changed doesn't make it an original idea.
AquaticPeach chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
I really like how badass Esme can be , shes a good mother :)
icyflames501 chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
guess who? ''taj mahal!''...really rokin story...n u've inspired me 2 rite sumthin 2...so, just wait 4 it...
Phoenix Fanatic chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
Very nice story, you wrote Esme very well.
Divine M chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
Wow, Yasmin that was much better that your draft! LOL!
rosalindleconte chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Welcome to the world of Twilight FanFic...we are all obcessed, so take all reviews with a grain of salt.

I think this is a very interesting angle you have got going here...and I want to hear even more about what Esme things, feels, hears, smells and all the rest.

GO deep and not just wide in your storytelling of her Point of View and you will captivate your audience.

Bravo and KEEP WRITING!
OrangeDuck chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
heyya

good story

im adding you on everything!

have fun writing the other chapters!

remember correct your mistakes!

x
so-fi-a chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
i like it..

i like it alot..

keep it up

ly xx
BeautyComesFromTheHeart chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Really good yasi! i think you should write more in esme's pov. Maybe the baseball game?
the gentle lamb chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Very well written! Good job, especially for a first story. Keep writting