Reviews for At The Deep End
pipelynn chapter 40 . 12/10
I have really enjoyed this story! Just read it straight through over a few days and am so glad i did. I needed loving and sweet, and this did it! a little kindness!
1tinac chapter 40 . 1/13
Amazing story. I truly enjoy
Kelly457 chapter 40 . 12/29/2016
I love the way 'u mess with' Stephs characters. Now following ur blog.
Gubefan1980 chapter 40 . 5/19/2016
Great story, wonderful that their father showed up for Rosalie's wedding. Probably appropriate or rather more realistic that he didn't show up for Jasper's wedding, that would have been too much of a stretch. Interesting that fucke. Alec showed up and thought he had a chance with Edward. Loved it a lot, very sweet progression to their relationship.
Gubefan1980 chapter 37 . 5/18/2016
That was a beautiful chapter, love that the boys are getting long so well, more more rimming I'm such a shameless rim slut. "Shrug shoulder, hey I'm a 72 yo widow who hasn't seem action on about 30;years)
Gubefan1980 chapter 36 . 5/18/2016
Well, we knew he was a,good man, instead of, Jasper's father being such a bsdtard and resorting to name calling, he should have taken the time to get to know the kind of man his son fell in love with. Great chapter
Gubefan1980 chapter 29 . 5/17/2016
What a nasty piece of work, wow he was a real fucker what an awful father
Gubefan1980 chapter 26 . 5/17/2016
Boy did they read my mind, lol. I kept thinking the same thing, that boy needs to talk to a professional. At first I was afraid he wasn't going to tell Edward about the phone call, and to be honest, though I don't usually do this, I checked the last chapter to make sure they were still together. I just went through an emotional wringer with If on a Winter Night, which I cried through more times than I can count. I also saw your note about taking this down or moving it so I wanted to make sure it was still here. I hope things have improved since you posted this. Have to take a break, RL calls, and right now, I can't take anymore crying. Xo
Gubefan1980 chapter 24 . 5/17/2016
The end was so incredibly beautiful, and more erotic than the most detailed sex scene because of their deep love for each other and their shared need to be just "us" thanks for that sweet tender love making. I'm confused though why Edward refers to his mother as Esme, I get that he's an adult, but the men I know refer to their mother, even when in the third person as Mom or Mother or Mama. unless it's a regionalism where men refer to their mother by their given name when talking about her. Oh well, just struck me as odd.
Gubefan1989 chapter 23 . 5/16/2016
I hope you won its a great and honest story. Some parents are loving and accepting ike Edward's too many are like Jasper's .very tragic, well and sensitively done
Gubefan1980 chapter 22 . 5/16/2016
Yes, unfortunately it does,happen all to often and sometimes the cops do nothing sometimes the skanks pull the "gay fear" card implying that the victim hit on the scumbags, sometimes the criminals get off for that very reason.
Gubefan1980 chapter 21 . 5/16/2016
Very devastating actually im not sure if that or what I imagined is worse. I thought his father saw them playing innocently together but got wrong ideas about their relationship and forbade,Jasper to have anythingto do with him or that Brendan was bullied and commutes suicide, sigh so tragic
Gubefan1980 chapter 20 . 5/16/2016
That was just lovely so sweet tender poignan. In a way it sort of was Edward's first time, his first time with the boy he fell in love with so long ago and now has grown to be a man he's in love with very nicely written
Gubefan1980 chapter 19 . 5/16/2016
I hope he has an easy time of it but I have my doubts especially with his asshat father. Good chapter crossing fingers for my boys. Porter, if Elizabeth Barrett Browning is anyone to go by that,stuff is nasty. Her father used to make her drink a pint of it everyday. She begged her doctor to get him to intervention. No such luck I suppose it depends what you are eating with it. I hate beer anyway. Reminds me of what I imagine whiz tastes like.
Gubefan1989 chapter 18 . 5/16/2016
Very nice chapter though I'm worried about Jasper, he's either planningto tell his parents And is terrified or he told his father, and he was,kicked our. Sorry about your health problems I hope they have been resolved.
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