|Reviews for The Guardian, the Ward and the Convict|
| the other witch chapter 9 . 2/19
Nice story, I enjoyed reading it. Snape nicely in character. Thanks
| BunnyBear27 chapter 9 . 12/19/2013
This book was awesome. I love how your able to keep the plot in check the whole time. I love how you just get how the characters would react to every thing happening. I really liked how you made the dementors be fake and that Malfoy go in to trouble. I also thought it was totally cute how you made Harry cuddle up to Snape. XD!
I already read two other stories of yours and just can't wait to read the sequel as I can always count on you to bring out the best in these characters as well as an awesome story to go with a Billion for writing this story! LOVED IT! XD!
| lilyflower101 chapter 9 . 11/11/2013
great story. :)
| Daisy chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Awsome chapter :)
| FatimaSnape chapter 5 . 6/6/2013
For Harry to be 12 going on 13, he speaks too much like an adult. The way he described Snape as a guardian to his friends-most adults do not speak that properly.
I also like the Harry/Ron. This is my first time every reading H/R, but I think I enjoy it.
Ron is not pigheaded in this fic, and I can appreciate that.
I do think that Snape could be a better guardian. No real guardian would tell their charge to go bum it out in the attic instead of having a proper room. No real guardian would have their charge climbing in and out a window to go outside either. It really isn't very realistic, though I do acknowledge that this is a fic.
There are a lot of little things I see wrong with this fic, some of which I mentioned above. But I haven't ragequit yet. So there's something to it.
| fanficfantasies chapter 9 . 3/22/2013
Yay! Great ending! I loved hearing about Harry's fear fit... poor Harry, I like his discomfort. great job with this story! The characters were very in-character... not OOC at all.
| Daronwyk chapter 9 . 2/15/2013
| jupimako chapter 9 . 2/11/2013
Very enjoyable story :).
| DesirePassion chapter 9 . 2/10/2013
Wow, a really fast paced story. But I wasn't surprised. It's only 9 chapters. But I did enjoy it. I liked how Sev was willing to hold onto Harry and address all his fears. I think that actions speak louder than words so even if Sev isn't comfortable to say that he cares about Harry then he can just show him. I hope that Harry will finally realize that Sev doesn't hate him at all. Ummm yeah still not liking the Ron x Harry thing. XD Ah well! Can't have everything...
| DesirePassion chapter 7 . 2/10/2013
So ummm did I miss something or did Sev and Harry not ever address Sev just running away when Harry told him that he heard his mum's final moments when the dementors are around? That was probably one of the worse things I've read in a fic.
:( Good Lord, I can't see Sev just bailing like that.
Well, I'll keep reading then.
| DesirePassion chapter 5 . 2/10/2013
"As if he needed their approval for his actions!" You get fifty points for the most realistic Severus reaction to Potter's friends ever. I've read many a Sev mentors Harry fics and there have been times when Sev indulges Weasley and Granger WAY too much. He puts up with cheekiness or them giving him parental advice. I mean there's no way in hell Severus Snape would put up with that bs. I like how realistically you portray Severus. I'm glad that I've decided to read this. I don't read slash. I only like yaoi when its canon. Ron and Harry are just friends. XD Hell, I'd even speculate that Ron's a bit of a homophobe. He seems to be non-touchy feely when he interacts with his best friend. But! I read the warning in the beginning of this fic so I knew what I was getting into. I'm just going to turn a blindeye to the slash between Ron and Harry and enjoy the story as a whole.
| rowan.catara chapter 9 . 2/1/2013
That was an awesome story. Well done!
| W und W chapter 9 . 12/22/2012
What a beautiful story. I absolutely loved it! At first I was a bit concerned when I realised there were only 9 chapters and it took you a couple of chapters at the beginning to even really start with the holidays, I wasnt sure how you would manage to squeeze a whole year into just 5 chapters or so. But you did an awesome job in just describing key situations and those not in too long a fashion. That way I always knew what was happening without the story getting boring. And I just loved the relationship between Harry and Snape. Snape was still a greasy git but obviously cared for Harry a lot. It was very sweet, I think.
| AJ Granger chapter 9 . 11/9/2012
Overall, I like this story. I like that Snape doesn't necessarily do a 180 in terms of what we know about him and how he acts. I like the attic room that Harry fixes up, and in general the way Snape handles things at the Shrieking Shack. I don't usually favor slash stories, and I am not a big fan of Ron, but the story works, and you can almost disregard that.
| Potterworm chapter 9 . 10/30/2012
A great story. I enjoyed the realism of it all, and the epilogue was a nice light- hearted conclusion to the tale.