Reviews for The Saga of Twilly:An Epic Ballad in Limerick Form
inked-writer chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
This is good! :D Wow, I miss AdventureQuest...
marcato chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH I think my head fell off laughing at this.
MixedBerryCoughDrop chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Well, the rhythm needs a little bit of work in some places, but other than that, it's pretty good. Don't you think that your profile is a little much? I agree that too many people on this website don't pay enough attention to capatilization and spelling, but your profile just says, "I'm better than you."
Coryx chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Well, the rhythm is a bit off in places, but... Very cute . I think this may well be the only limerick story in the whole of . (I'mma go check that now...) Oh, it's not. By any stretch of the imagination. But it's the first one I've ever seen.
Catclaw Maelwys chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
I apologise...

maybe all i have to complain of now is your profile.

Congratulations.

Your flames make partial sense -[ you tell whats wrong but not how to help. One of my friends has a problem with that, but quite frankly i do it all the time.

(Yeah I know - "i" not capitalized)

Sigh.
Catclaw Maelwys chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Hey...

You are a very good writer.

This is a perfect blend. It's funny too.

But...

I just read your profile.

The first part was too much. I agree with the whole "correct your grammar and spelling and capitalization and goodness knows what else because it - is - so - annoying!" part, but really that much information just gets old. Especially when people know these things and usually make mistakes when they are sleepy, forgetful, or they just don't care.

The second part... goodness yes these people can all use a good spanking in writing protocol such as not being stupid in writing titles or summaries. I especially agree with "not writing please reviews or please don't flames" (because they're stupid)

But hey, believe me, some of my vocab gets mashed as well as everything else- out the window because it just feels fun to write reviews that way.

And the very last part about writing summaries "how NOT to"

yeah...

To me it smacked of "I am better older wiser more experience than you, you stupid beep for doing what other fools do". And hey, it's probably true, but that attitude is annoying and unnecessary.

I'm sorry. Maybe I am being hypocritical. I have been known to mildly flame people with horrible summaries, grammar, and plots completely out of nowhere (although random can be fun too if done properly...) I guess I am a hypocrite?

I don't know what I am, then. But that profile just disturbed me coupled with thte fact a friend told me you flame people.

Flaming people in the extreme sense is what I disagree with. I HATE YOUR STORY YOU SUCK and having that one line just send with no explanation is uncool. The person must not have enough wits to explain why the author and story sucks.

I guess I’m flaming you. If you are still reading this, I am surprised and impressed. I would read through all this but almost no one else I know would.

So…

Bye.

Wish I could say something positive now

I think (I think?) we’re kindred spirits? BUT we go around making our points two different ways

What a run-on letter to the author.

I’m quite curious now to see how you will respond-

If its good, I’ll be pleasantly surprised

If it’s a rockin tantrum…

Well, maybe amusing. Perhaps.

I do like the limerick really.

PS you can PM me on my friends account (I know – no account – No EMAIL – my parents… – how sick is that?) which is Aklea Nerriadre
Tabbyprincess chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
I just read this to someone in the library and now everyone who heard thinks you have way too much time on your hands.
Maelwys gameir chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
gut., funny, short, and sweet

good rhyming
Iris Marshall chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
AHAHAHHA, my sister plays aq its rather good! i'm on level 40 atm, my sisters on 30 (PWNT) Anway, who ever thought it's stupid shout shout their wannabe-uncontrable mouth.
Cheri de Poisson Impressionnan chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
I haven't heard of Adventure Quest before, but I liked your poem :3
Sorry is not enough chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
I have created an entirely new account just to get through the user blockage and apologize to you for the rude PM I sent you. It was more than rude, it was inexcusable. Once I realized what I had done I ran to the bathroom and puked, I was so digusted with myself. I cannot tell you in words how sorry I am. I don't know what I was thinking and I pray to God that you could somehow forgive me. I have never in my life done somthing so terrible and I hate myself for doing it. You did not deserve that and sorry is not enough. I hoped and prayed that that PM would never reach you and that you wouldn't see it becasue i was so incredibly wrong to do it. PLEASE DO NOT TAKE THIS APOLOGY AS ME TRYING TO SWEETEN YOU! This comes from my heart, my apologies to you. Everyone is entitled to their opinion and I was so very very wrong to do that. My heart is heavy with the knowledge that I did somthing so terrible to you. I truly have nothing against jewish people , their belifs or skin color, or ethnicity. One of my very best friends is jewish and I would kill myself if she ever found out I wrote that. I am not anti-semitic. I am digusted with myself that I could do such a terrible, horrible thing, I hope in my heart that you can one day forgive me. It was so wrong, so very wrong that I wish I could travel back in time to keep myself from hitting 'send'. No one should have that said to them or be hurt like that. I pray that you can forgive me and that such things will never escape my lips again.

I know this is simply not enough to say how sorry I am but it is all I have to offer, if I could I would give more.
silverstorm94 chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
this is the stupidest thing ive ever read