|Reviews for The Date|
| IAmUmbreon chapter 1 . 2/4
I...dunno what to say...
Except this sucks.
Sorry, but it does.
Too much description of underwear, not enough description of HOW AN EARTH BAND GOT INTO THE POKEMON WORLD AND WHY RAIKOU AND SUICUNE ARE HUMAN.
Improve your writing.
| adam1980 chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
This really nice and cool story
wonderfully about raikouxsuicune