Reviews for Five Rooms Remus and Sirius Have Kissed In
sashimidragon chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Brilliant. I LOVED it. Really neat the way you just dropped us into the scenes, so it really felt like we were seeing little snapshots of their lives. That was cool.
mrsremusjohnlupin chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
This was amazing. (:

The first bit is

happy, then it moves

to sad after Sirius

had been tucked away

and then the end

with time slipping away.

Veryveryvery sad. :[

Buuut it was AWESOME!
Captain Boo Bear chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
damn i love them

this is good
SiriusBlackShouldntHaveDied chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
OH! So wait, was the 4th room after Sirius got out of Azkaban?

But this was a beaautiful story ]
NasuadaNightstalker chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Awe, I love this! Eek!

It's really well written!

Keep writing,

Caketin :)
Spamsterlady chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Beautifully done! I really, really like how you did this.
KissMeUnderTheStars chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
simple yet classic.

you managed to portray both characters incredibly well through simple dialogue and just a few sentences. I liked the transition of time, how Remus' thoughts changed a bit from room to room, year to year. Very well done. )
snapmagic chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Ooh, i like it. My favourite was the "Am I a stand that you're taking?"
x9x9x9x9x9xx9 chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
"...while it slips away regardless... That's just beautiful.

So glad I found this, if only for that line. But the rest is fun and lovely, too :)
ThatMasterOfChaos chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
this LOVE! literally. lol. i loved sirius; so in character. and remus.

"You woke her. You were" - Sirius licks his ear - "screaming." He turns his head and yells, "Can't hear you, mother, I'm too busy fucking my boyfriend!"

favorite line! i could totally see remus being the one screaming . . . ;) . . . and sirius' dialogue is so him. haha! made me laugh.

i agree with another reviewer; you SHOULD make a story out of the fifth room with someone (SNAPE!) downstairs! :DD
Neverland Regular chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
This is actually pretty darn amazing :D

I loved the angst and the comedy and the sadness, all together as it goes through the years.

I loved the "Am I a stand that you're taking?"

And the "Hey, Snape, you virgin-" made me laugh out loud!

I thoroughly enjoyed this.
ihearthpfanfic chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
I enjoyed reading this. it was so cute!

i laughed at the part:

"Can't hear you, mother, I'm too busy fucking my boyfriend!"

that is so SIRIUS

10/10
RecklessWonder chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
I enjoyed bedroom the best! Made me laugh.

Great wee drabbles!
muhaaauder chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Really good collection here. I like how they're angsty, but not too angsty, and how they're all quite meaningful, and yet very different in tone, style and seriousness. Would like to see more...
rathwynn grey chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
This so perfectly captures their time together. And kudos for not adding too much angst at the end.
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