Reviews for Ben 10 Forever
Naruhaku96 chapter 17 . 7/24
Why is Starfire the only Tamaranean that talks the way that she does, when we've other Tamaraneans talk like normal people? I'm talking about cannon Starfire, from the cartoon.
Mystic Silver Pirate chapter 1 . 10/18/2018
I'd ignore all of the highly negative guest reviews here. It's my belief that those people can't write to save their life.

Besides that, been doing a good job with Forever so far (do like the nods to the Kamen Rider franchise) and I eagerly await for Season 2
Shogun lord poke burst chapter 5 . 8/4/2018
OMNIMON! TRANSCENDENT SWORD! SUPREME CANNON!
David chapter 4 . 7/26/2018
how many times did you really need to use the word being? several times it occurred twice in the same sentence. You need to be more imaginative with your word choice.
The Final Faux chapter 1 . 4/30/2018
Nah. Continuity shifts too hard. And you're not connecting all the dots. The Plumbers have been around (from as far as I can assume) for hundreds if not thousands of years. The JLA has only been around for less than a hundred if current members are still alive, but clearly it has to have been within 10 years of its conception if they're all still in their prime. Maybe not even that.

Secondly, the Omnitrix was a device created to promote world peace, with its bearer as the great ambassador of the universe. That isn't something people just aren't aware of. Even under a rock, the JLA, being involved with aliens, would have heard of Ben's exploits as its bearer. Secondly, the bulk of all the issues thrown at Ben would have been handed off to the JLA instead. Continuity is a pain.
Time Emperor chapter 1 . 4/9/2018
Global Warming is NOT a thing!
Guest chapter 20 . 1/8/2018
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Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
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Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
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Dec 9, 2017 c20 22YokaiAngel
superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
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Dec 9, 2017 c20 22YokaiAngel
superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
I like it
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superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
I like it
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Dec 9, 2017 c20 22YokaiAngel
superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
I like it
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Dec 9, 2017 c20 22YokaiAngel
superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
I like it
Mar 25, 2017 c13 2blood enraged
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Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
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superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
I like it
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Dec 9, 2017 c20 22YokaiAngel
superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
I like it
Mar 25, 2017 c13 2blood enraged
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Dec 9, 2017 c20 22YokaiAngel
superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
I like it
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Dec 9, 2017 c20 22YokaiAngel
superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
I like it
Mar 25, 2017 c13 2blood enraged
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Dec 9, 2017 c20 22YokaiAngel
superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
I like it
Mar 25, 2017 c13 2blood enraged
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Dec 9, 2017 c20 22YokaiAngel
superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
I like it
Mar 25, 2017 c13 2blood enraged
personal opinion, to much fighting and not enough romance/character progression, lost intrest around here

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Dec 9, 2017 c20 22YokaiAngel
superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
I like it
Mar 25, 2017 c13 2blood enraged
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Dec 9, 2017 c20 22YokaiAngel
superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
I like it
Mar 25, 2017 c13 2blood enraged
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Dec 9, 2017 c20 22YokaiAngel
superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
I like it
Mar 25, 2017 c13 2blood enraged
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Dec 9, 2017 c20 22YokaiAngel
superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
Sep 22, 2017 c20 30BigChillFreak
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
Sep 22, 2017 c18 BigChillFreak
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
Sep 22, 2017 c11 BigChillFreak
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
Aug 5, 2017 c1 ScrewYou
FU for deleting my honest comment
Aug 4, 2017 c1 Don'tCareAnymore
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
Jun 27, 2017 c20 blazenrun
I like it
Mar 25, 2017 c13 2blood enraged
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Dec 9, 2017 c20 22YokaiAngel
superb!~~~~~
Nov 4, 2017 c20 tomahawkESP
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
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YokaiAngel chapter 20 . 12/8/2017
superb!~~~~~
tomahawkESP chapter 20 . 11/4/2017
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!
BigChillFreak chapter 20 . 9/22/2017
I LOVE BROMANCE! Its Guy Love don't compromise the feeling of some other guy holding you up into the sky ill ne there to share all the lows ill be there to share the highs its guy love between two guys and when i say i love you_its not what it implies
BigChillFreak chapter 18 . 9/22/2017
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU DIDNT, YOU DID XD You used the line from thw movie when Diaboromon was defeated
BigChillFreak chapter 11 . 9/22/2017
i just realized Again was the first opening of FMAB XD oh god im an idiot
ScrewYou chapter 1 . 8/4/2017
FU for deleting my honest comment
Don'tCareAnymore chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
It's been about 3 years, even before the last update if I remember correctly. If you have time to read, you have time to write, that simple. If you truly cared you would've make time to write, what a shame too.
blazenrun chapter 20 . 6/26/2017
I like it
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