Reviews for An Apple A Day
Ross chapter 17 . 7/12/2020
Delongbi,I just wanted to ask if Erin got a Kirlia with her or if it was just a mistake because I never saw it answer me.
Ross chapter 1 . 6/17/2020
It will be easier if you write a character's point of view so readers are a lot less ,I hope you continue this story.
Guest chapter 11 . 4/14/2020
It’s alright, but I just don’t feel excited by this story anymore. I can’t put my finger on it but I it’s probably some weird personal preference...
Guest chapter 10 . 4/14/2020
I don’t understand Anita. She doesn’t want to learn her psychic powers that people would probably KILL for because...she thinks she’ll be an outcast when the only person with her is encouraging her to learn about it? And so is Apple and Griffy, even Griffy’s tail! Who’s gonna make u an outcast? Is there trauma here?
Guest chapter 9 . 4/14/2020
{...anger management, anger management, anger management, anger management, anger management, anger management...}
AyumiVA chapter 52 . 2/24/2020
WAAAAA please finish the storyty for updating the story until now btw your a really good writer xD please continue this story :3
goreador chapter 52 . 1/18/2020
its been a hot minute since ive read this fic, but it really holds a special place in my heart
i found it when i was about 9 or so and confused about a lot of things. im now 16 and slightly less confused about things
i dont really want to unload my life story onto you, but this fic helped me a LOT of stuff. in some weird way, this help made me figure out i was bi, and then from there ive just grown a lot happier with myself. this fic made me really happy when i was younger, and it helped me through some incredibly rough times
i dont know if youll read this, but im happy this fic exists. im not going to beg you to finish it - i think thats just stupid, because in my opinion when people tell me to do things i dont want to do it at all - but i just wanted to thank you for writing this and thanks for the good times c:
ShadowStained chapter 1 . 11/19/2019
Sorry I'm not logged in.
I was just playing the new Pokemon games Sword and Shield and thought of this story! The new trials remind me so much of An Apple A Day, it makes me wish An Apple A Day was the real game!
I've always loved this story and I've been following it for so long, so I hope someday you come back and update it again! I think it's time for me to reread for the fourth or fifth time! :)
HamClad chapter 6 . 4/23/2019
An...an Aggron!? W-well, I sure hope the mom's okay. Did she get split in half or something?
Guest chapter 15 . 4/16/2019
Use the force Anita
Vpa chapter 52 . 3/4/2019
RIP story ... Continue it please
Transcendant115 chapter 52 . 1/18/2019
This story is phenomenal. Let me read it all again a few more times and I might come up with some constructive criticism, but for now let me just say that this is beautifully done. The characters are great, the setting's good, the antagonist is realistic while still being evil, and overall it's done exceptionally well, especially by the standards of this site. I really hope you continue this. That November 2018 update is promising.
If I have any problem with this story, it's that I don't like the time travel aspect. That's more a matter of personal opinion than actual flaws, though, as I know many people who love stories that involve time travel. And you've utilized it better than many, so I even enjoyed those parts.
Also, to the people who reviewed this and complained about Liam's power cancelling out Anita's, allow me to point out that it's because the Dark-Type is immune to the Psychic-Type. Seriously. It's not a matter of resistance, it's a matter of it receiving no damage whatsoever. It's not illogical, as some of you put it, but rather staying true to the actual type matchup system.

So, to summarize, I enjoyed many aspects of this story, the one aspect I didn't like was a matter of personal preference, and it stayed true to actual Pokemon mechanics, Phenomenal job, and I hope that I see more from this story!
Guest chapter 52 . 6/8/2018
This story is awesome and it's beyond my favorite EVER. So if You could please keep writing and finish it that would be the best thing ever. Thank you for doing what you have done already, and with that I say goodbye.
Anonymous chapter 52 . 1/12/2018
Are you still writing? I hope you are because I LOVE your book. I know you shouldn't rush a writer because they're trying to produce the highest quality work, but... it seems you haven't written anything in a long time.
A Human chapter 52 . 7/15/2017
-_- Update?
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