Reviews for Third Mate
Guest chapter 2 . 2/25
Awesome job
Guest chapter 2 . 3/18/2016
It was kinda confusing who you wer talking about sometimes. Remember: there are three people in these sex scenes, not just two. Otherwise, great job!
anonymous chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
This story is okay but I think it's a little unfair. I doubt harry would have won if Sirius was at his best. He just got out of the hospital soooooo...
PiptheSnake chapter 2 . 11/1/2013
This is very good; I like
V. L. Crawford chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
Great story.
cethmistmyk chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
Hmmm... I love the smut, but I see a little plot peeking out... :-)
Can't wait to find out about that!
Although it appears you don't see much plot here... :-)
DarkAdarah chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
Wait, I didn't understand that last, Harry is the omega, the mother and nurturer, shouldn't he be the bottom to Sirius and Remus? Because Sirius is the Beta, second to the Alpha right? Nonetheless Loves this fic...soooo HOT
animebuddy97 chapter 2 . 11/3/2012
please continue!
Child of Dreams chapter 2 . 8/13/2012
Booker10 chapter 2 . 8/5/2011
Tadpoleinateacup chapter 2 . 6/6/2011
This was cool. I liked the take on the "pack" thing.
MissiYoung chapter 2 . 2/14/2011
wow...this was seriously hot!
Din chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Ok, I like your story but it's GRIMMAULD place not Griwwauld, AZKABAN not Askaban and BELLATRIX not Bealtrix. Those really annoyed me. I'm surprised no-one else commented on those. Other than that: nicely done.
Mika the Dark princess chapter 2 . 9/3/2010
Lov it
Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 2 . 5/22/2010
love it!
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