|Reviews for Third Mate|
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/18
It was kinda confusing who you wer talking about sometimes. Remember: there are three people in these sex scenes, not just two. Otherwise, great job!
| anonymous chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
This story is okay but I think it's a little unfair. I doubt harry would have won if Sirius was at his best. He just got out of the hospital soooooo...
| PiptheSnake chapter 2 . 11/1/2013
This is very good; I like
| V. L. Crawford chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
| cethmistmyk chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
Hmmm... I love the smut, but I see a little plot peeking out... :-)
Can't wait to find out about that!
Although it appears you don't see much plot here... :-)
| DarkAdarah chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
Wait, I didn't understand that last, Harry is the omega, the mother and nurturer, shouldn't he be the bottom to Sirius and Remus? Because Sirius is the Beta, second to the Alpha right? Nonetheless Loves this fic...soooo HOT
| animebuddy97 chapter 2 . 11/3/2012
| Child of Music and Dreams chapter 2 . 8/13/2012
| Booker10 chapter 2 . 8/5/2011
| Tadpoleinateacup chapter 2 . 6/6/2011
This was cool. I liked the take on the "pack" thing.
| MissiYoung chapter 2 . 2/14/2011
wow...this was seriously hot!
| Din chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Ok, I like your story but it's GRIMMAULD place not Griwwauld, AZKABAN not Askaban and BELLATRIX not Bealtrix. Those really annoyed me. I'm surprised no-one else commented on those. Other than that: nicely done.
| Mika the Dark princess chapter 2 . 9/3/2010
| Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 2 . 5/22/2010
| Ian Nightfang chapter 2 . 2/20/2010
Really good. Interesting how you changed the positions of the betas and omegas from how they are in wolf packs, since the omega is less dominant than the beta, and changing it so there's only one alpha. Necessary changes to promote the right conflicts and prevent the wrong ones from happening. Very well-written, and hot.