|Reviews for Krillen's 100'th Proposal and After|
| tomorrow4eva chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
Lovely! Its good to see Piccolo being social. And Krillen is so likeable. Really enjoyed the story.
| Too-Many-Ships chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
Aw- This is nice fanfiction. I really like it :3
| meganechan720 chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
I don't get cable.
Your characterization is amazing. They're more like themselves than they are in the anime.
| Raven Mage Jagonshi chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
I really enjoyed this. It shows the dynamics of a relationship that is down played by the series. Although I can’t say I truly understand where you’re coming from, since I’ve only ever heard the English dub version, but I can definitely see that happening (Piccolo saying it was a dishonor to be protected). It really was well put together; both Piccolo and Krillin were in perfect character for the time frame. The comment on the “implications that could get you killed” was absolutely hilarious and I really would like to see you go further with it if you choose to write a second installment. I’ve got one written myself if you have time.
| nikita2468 chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
i really like your stories
your the kind of writer who keeps peolpe wanting more
the kind who can tell a story without it getting boring
the brothers idea was amazing
i really want to see what happens to cymbal
and nobody else seems to think of about krillin and piccolo being friends
keep writng man
| FluffyBiscuits chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
I loved this! Hats off to a great Piccolo/ Krillen fic.
| Anne Ominous chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Excellent! Very nicely written, and everyone is in character - I can hear the proper voices in my head as I'm reading this. It's great to see a story with Krillin in it, and I'm especially glad to see one with Piccolo where he isn't a pedophile or falling in love with some chick despite being an entirely incompatable species.
| Amiko-san chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Oh wow that was interesting and very well written. I never liked Marron and Krillin ending up with 18 fit so much better. I would never have thought of something like this occuring but my, oh, my it played out perfectly. I adore how you always portrey Piccolo perfectly.
| Esplandian chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
It is the second time I read this one. I am so glad of reading it, since I got to read more of your beautiful work. You are a magnificent writer.
Hope you don't come and hunt me for the rest of the eternity (even if I do deserve) for what I am going to write: I translated "Home" and published in Spanish (As a translation of mine, with all the proper credit given to you.) So sorry for not asking your permission before. I just couldn't let that story unknown to Spanish speaking readers.
All the proper credit is given to you, I am just a translator.
My sincere apologies, and all my admiration for you.
It is posted under id:5128098.
| AAA chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
On a scale of 1 to 10, this story ranks somewhere around 15 or 16.
I've always been a big devotee to the fics that develop the characters' unspoken relationships with each other, and your story delivers on so many levels. I could easily see it as a scene in an episode (if they ever decided to get as introspective as this).
I have to admit, by the end of the story, I was feeling just about as good as Krillen; big, stupid smile and all. Thank you so much for writing this! It's perfect. It is the perfect DBZ fanfic.
| Sambev chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
Nice, I liked it a lot. Krillin was really in character. :D
| Raptured Night chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
There really are not enough good quality Piccolo/friendship based stories out there. And most certainly, there are very few that center around the Piccolo/Krillin friendship. Personally, I always wanted to see their relationship explored a bit more. Watching the Garlic Junior Saga, it's obvious -at least to me- that they ARE more than just connected by common ground as warriors. Even if not ever openly stated, I do feel that they have their own unique kind of friendship.
A friendship I felt you managed to capture PERFECTLY with this beautifully written bit of fan-fiction. The characterization, the diologue, the description, the GRAMMAR AND SPELLING, all excellently accomplished. All I can say, is incredibly well done job. This is one that will make my favorites list. Thank you for this little gem.
| Rebecky-mo chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
YAY, Piccolo and Krillin friendship story!
| RaCM chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
The clash between Krillin's comic personality and Piccolo's stoic attitude was awesomely written here. (Even if I like to pretend that saga never happened, eheh) This brought a smile to my face. :D
| Mushy chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Aww cute fic!