|Reviews for Fracture|
| Greenhemoglobin chapter 9 . 11/9/2009
ah is it over it can't be over ?
| Adi Sagestar chapter 9 . 10/3/2009
This is just too awesome. Please update soon.
| SilkJupiter chapter 9 . 8/6/2009
Aw gez Daniel ): did he? Oh man I need to know! Why did you left it at a cliffhanger? You're making me suffer!
| Temeti chapter 9 . 7/7/2009
wow. dont leave it there! so good!
| megumisakura chapter 9 . 7/5/2009
| Viviane Renard chapter 9 . 7/5/2009
Wow, Dan really did a number on that alien...and I think it just brutalized his brain as well. XD I can't wait to see what happens next!
| ArmoredSoul chapter 9 . 7/5/2009
| demonlifehealer chapter 9 . 7/4/2009
Holy crap! Did Daniel die? Oh poor Walter! I wanted the two of them to be together! Please update soon!
| limepickles chapter 8 . 6/10/2009
I love this! What a great idea - instead of trying to nicen up Rorschach to Dan's level... bring Dan down to Rorschach's crazy level. It seems in-character that the more normal Dan would just fall harder and end up even more unstable, scary, and dangerous than Rorschach if he tried to take the same road.
| demonlifehealer chapter 8 . 5/23/2009
That hug was so beautiful!And what did he mean by Daniel's a tiger? I really do love how those two work together! Please update soon!
| Kairan1979 chapter 8 . 5/10/2009
Great breakout scene. Nite Owl burning the jail is very in character.
| Temeti chapter 8 . 5/10/2009
definatley a different direction
| SilkJupiter chapter 8 . 5/10/2009
Wow this has been a good read, Dan calling Rorschach "Rory" seems a bit weird but since this isn't the Dan we know and love I can't really say it's OOC.
Still I love this fic and I am always checking to see if it updates :D.
| Viviane Renard chapter 8 . 5/10/2009
As they get closer to fighting the man pulling all the strings, I get more nervous for them...it really will be tough, as they acknowledge.
Oh, and maybe I'm just obtuse, but I didn't know what Rorschach's line of "Thought Daniel was tiger, not owl" was referring to. All I can think of is Blake's poem, "Tiger tiger burning bright, in the forest of the night," and although it's a shaky remembrance I can't really apply that poem in the context of Rorschach's sentence.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
| bena28 chapter 8 . 5/9/2009
love it better then i hoped i can't wait to read the next chapter your story is getting to be better then the movie!