Reviews for One Harry Potter, Please |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah... I think I'm rendered speechless here. This was incredibly sexy. And when I say sexy, I mean there-is-no-word(s)-that-thoroughly-defines-how-amazing-this-story-is kind of sexy. I was a giddy mess by the end of the last chapter and the whole: Draco's lips twitched. "We'll see about that. But no, this is about . . ." Draco looked around at the empty cubical. "This desk." "Er, what about it?" "Does it look" — Draco pressed his palms firmly on the desk and shook it, waggling his eyebrows — "sturdy to you Yeah... brilliant. I almost wish it didn't end. :c |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can I just say that I love you? haha. See, I think I've just read almost ALL of your fics. (I wish I was kidding, I have too much free time on my hands-I read all of the Harry/Draco ones except the vampire one and The Small Print.) And I think that you-are positively fantastic. You are marvelous at keeping them in character, and the misconceptions that usually abound are very amusing. And the sex, well that's just fantastic, I mean wow steamy. Anyway, I especially love your multi-chaptered stuff. This was seriously fantastic and amazingly done. They're just so... cute. Thank you! Keep on doin' what you do! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my God I wanted to bang my head to my desk so many times I lost track! how can they be so blind! I love you! you're amazing! amazing story |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOSH! That was awesome! |
![]() ![]() I love the way you are able to really get into your characters and not ever give away too much information at once. This was an addictive read - I had to go all the way through in one go! :D Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! |
![]() ![]() OH MY GOD THIS IS THE BEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ. YOU ARE AMAZING |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww nice story! :) oh and the sex.. wow! :D thx for writing _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is impossible for me to critique this fic. Not exactly because it's perfect, but because every time I notice a potential shortcoming, my brain immediately supplies an excuse or valid justification for it. For example, the degree of denial and misreading of intent between the two boys is so great it initally seemed ridiculous and overdone (if endearing and amusing-this story NEVER fails to be so), possibly contrived at times. And then I thought, Wait. I'm confusing fiction and reality. In real life, it's not so easy to accurately and intuitively read another person's thoughts and emotions through their eyes or their tone of voice. In real life, we see what we expect to see, such as disdain and dismissal where there might actually be tentative yet cautious interest. And then there's the unraveling of the storyline in the last chapter, in which all goes to hell and becomes rather like a soap opera, with the lies layered upon lies built upon misunderstanding. But I can't fault that either, because Draco and Harry being who they are to each other, naturally they would lash out and defend themselves instead of initally talking things through like rational folk. That's what makes this pairing, as well as your beautifully written story, so thoroughly entertaining. Thank you for such a long and satisfying read; I honestly didn't want it to end! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent... The best story I've read in like... so long. I thought it was desperate not to make me feel bored! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely work and fun to read. Great job! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I give you a box of paperclips. |
![]() ![]() ![]() . . Okay I was lying I do. :D This was absolutely amazing! I think this- along with Draco Malfoy, it's your lucky day- is my favorite story of yours! The pace and the characters are perfect and the developement of their relationship is just right. I loved that banging-on-the-door scene. It's kind of a chliché but it so works here! And the sex was awesome, because you really managed to convey the nervousness and the desire they both felt (especially Draco). All through the first part of the story I couldn't decide whether I wanted to hug Harry or smack Draco on the head, because he was so oblivious. :D But then Draco made it alright by deciding to get rid of his competition and walk in with the rose. There's so much about this story I love, that I could go on for a while longer, but I'd probably be randomely rambling so I'll stop here.;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I'm in love with your writing; do you think it's possible for me to marry it? |