Reviews for Achieving Clarity
Iamnotawriter chapter 13 . 8/15
As a latecomer to your story, I was able to read it as a quite enjoyable one-shot. While I personally, disagree with sexual relationships at that age, I'm not naive enough to think that it doesn't happen. More to the point, it was a reasonable part of the story, and kept in context. Kudos on the balance between titillating, and degenerating into "Plot?, What plot?" At the expense of the story.
Sixstringsamurai83 chapter 4 . 8/14
That's one of the reasons i hate Ron First he treats Hermione like dirt most of the time, Then he gets with Lavender to use her, then he uses pick up tactics to win Hermione
That makes Hermione look stupid and gullible, that's not Hermione in my mind.
Buckwert chapter 13 . 8/2
mathmagical Luna is awesome
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 7/30
hopefully lavender can reform ron with a bit of help
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 7/30
why didnt they destroy the vanishing cabinet? its a shame they didnt shatter malfoys mind though...
thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 7/30
i usually prefer the slower romance fics, but its nice to read fluff like this once in a while
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 7/30
things progress a bit fast at the end of the chapter, but this is otherwise pretty good
chrisd312002us chapter 13 . 7/19
I always hate stories where after the dark poser was defeated, Harry lived happily ever after in Britian. As if the sheeple worshipped or hated him didnt matter to him. The Ministry doing what they did. I loved how you got Harry to point that out to them and left Britian all together. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
covertpartyhat chapter 13 . 7/1
David M. Potter chapter 13 . 5/19
Kai chapter 13 . 5/14
It's a good story, with a ship I like. Hermione and Luna are hands down the hottest, at least in my head canon. And Padma is the better Patil twin (brains are sexy!). Funnyly enough I think the actress who portrayed Parvati is prettier than the actress who portrayed Padma. Those two roles could've been interchanged...

But the bestest part of it, in my opinion, is the dressing down of stupid, lazy, cowardly Magical Britain in the last chapter. Voldemort is bad enough and only Harry can kill him (although even in canon the prophesy is most probably a fake), but there is no reason to let his minions run amok without ever fighting back. And Voldemort alone is not nearly as dangerous. He has only one wand, he has NO money, and he can be blown out of his body, it's just his soul that doesn't move on...
WordSmyth chapter 13 . 5/5
I like to think that for most of the speach his voice was kind of light and airy, but when he says "get the fuck out of Britain" he is suddenly loud and focused, and really doubles down on "fuck" just to add even more emphasis.

Anyway, loved the story!
Foxy Engineer chapter 13 . 5/4
This was a good fic. It did have its moments where I questioned since of you plot choices, but other than that I think it was really good.
Paddybee chapter 13 . 4/16
Not just this chapter- Just to say Thank you- I really enjoyed it.
Any time you wish to write another, go ahead! I class you with Northumbrian and Robst, as part of the very few that are competent...
Well done!
Guest chapter 13 . 4/10
great story, much enjoyed

only one thing really stuck in my craw and that was the 'minutemen of Great britain'... would rather be like the SA-brownshirts of Israel wouldn't it... naming a unit after people who were to the Uk narrative nothing more than filthy traitors?
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