Reviews for Out of the Office
Lya Long chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
Thats fucking hot bitch! OmG how did you do this?! Ridiculously awesome, thanks for sharing tour talent . Only for this, I love you so much...
KareBear1965 chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
that was hot.

Cy.Naomhan chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Awesome. Maybe you should include this into the story and change the story's rating to include this outtake.
MsWhiteChristmas chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
That was... HOTT! Jesus, i loved it! You are a great lemon writer!
xx-Fran-Rue-Melark-xx chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Really good,

Please R&R mine


weflytothetardis chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
OMG! that was really good! LOVES IT!
BabyDoll chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
I liked that story it was quite interesting i mean i have never thought of carlisle in that manner before and well it was quite the treat i especially like your role play of Jasper being the big brother over protective type it is a nice other side to him and i really think it fits his part in Twilight you have done a great job and hopefully you dont stop writing soon because i and probably many others enjoyed that story possibly a teeny bit to much lol
angelaboosh chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
That. Was. Brilliant.

Think I might like this more than the original version, hehe.
forgotten22 chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
Hot damn that was good! Too bad its over! :(
cursegirl chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
i like this version better you should continue this one! )
naelany chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Hello Mr Hot Bitch! Wowza
marigold123 chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
Totally HOT! Loved it!
cravingtwilight chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
your story is very sexy! i liked it alot! looking forward to reading the rest of your story!
YazPistachio19 chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
I really liked this chapter, I just wanted to let you know why I didn't vote for it in the HB contest. It really is great as a chapter, or an outtake from Carried Away. But as a one shot, its a little confusing. There is a little bit of backstory that needs explaining. It was, however, interesting enough to get my interest and as a result I read Carried Away. And now I can't wait to read more of that.

So really, I just wanted to tell you that I did enjoy this, and I thought it was well written, just not great as a One Shot.
mudpuddledemon chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
What? But... it's over? really? no more? I'm so sad. I was so into it, I'm a little dazed. Wow. Good job you.
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