Reviews for Perfect
tookeeluv chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Only thing that threw me was the transition from Alice's memory to her conversation with Bella. Other than that, it's good. Thanks...
xLove-Hate-Relationshipx chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
It was okay. I think it would have been cooler if it was a little bit longer and maybe have a bit more conversation from the rest of the family. I understood that Edward wasn't at home...but why didn't Rose question Alice? It would have been so much like her to do so. And where the heck was Emmett? Or Carlisle and Esme? I really liked it, but you could have been a bit clearer. Just some constructive critisism- no offense intended.
Inkhandedlady chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
aw... sweet. i like! I always wondered how alice got the dress and how early it was.