Reviews for The Head Boy's Secretary
Stardust8 chapter 32 . 1/2
Wow this story was so intense, but very engaging. I thought her innocence was a little too naive for a 14 year old, but otherwise really interesting/horrifying story. Great character depth!
voldie's lover chapter 32 . 1/13/2013
Wow...This story...intense... I'm speechless...

Again, I'm flabbergasted as to WHY this story didn't receive as many reviews as it deserved...

I keep forgetting that he is evil, and your stories brutally remind me that he is truly EVIL, in all sense...

I loved the story sooo much...
wandamarie chapter 32 . 2/26/2011
it was a great story thanks keep up the great work on your other stories you are a great writer thanks
DeFine Darkness chapter 32 . 2/25/2011
You should definitely write something in first person! I found this very believable and a wonderful ending. Thank you for writing and entertaining me (I do tend to get myself into trouble when I'm not entertained properly).
Pensieve Plotter chapter 31 . 2/23/2011
Here is a link to my youtube video i made for "The Head Boy's Secretary." while not as good as i'd want it to be, it is still interesting to have a look.

watch?voErRZ61yPt0
wandamarie chapter 31 . 2/23/2011
it was a good one thank and thank you for sharing your talents with all of us i love all of your stories keep up the great work
DeFine Darkness chapter 31 . 2/22/2011
I must say that this chapter felt rather 'spot-on'. Each time it got close to out-of-character they were reigned back in and I think it showed just how 'on edge' and tense you wanted it to be. I'm sure the Epilogue will be exciting and that I will be re-reading this soon - perhaps even finding things to edit and pointing them out.
DeFine Darkness chapter 31 . 2/22/2011
I must say that this chapter felt rather 'spot-on'. Each time it got close to out-of-character they were reigned back in and I think it showed just how 'on edge' and tense you wanted it to be. I'm sure the Epilogue will be exciting and that I will be re-reading this soon - perhaps even finding things to edit and pointing them out.
DeFine Darkness chapter 30 . 2/17/2011
Beautifully somber. I enjoyed the movement of things. Will you be writing something else after you complete this story?
wandamarie chapter 30 . 2/17/2011
it is a good one thanks keep up the great work i love all of your stories
DeFine Darkness chapter 30 . 2/17/2011
Beautifully somber. I enjoyed the movement of things. Will you be writing something else after you complete this story?
wandamarie chapter 29 . 1/30/2011
it was a good one keep up the good work
DeFine Darkness chapter 29 . 1/28/2011
The flow of the writing was only interrupted a few times in places where I hold different views or ideas but as usual, more than satisfactory. I particularly appreciated word choice this chapter like 'ululations'. I will be...frustratingly sad to see this end but I still look to coming chapters in high anticipation.
wandamarie chapter 28 . 1/22/2011
it is a good one thanks for sharing your talents with all of us
DeFine Darkness chapter 28 . 1/20/2011
Quite appealing and something I always look foward to. I am very excited for coming chapters. I can't say anything particularly stood out as 'wrong' so I must thank you for your fantastic work.
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