Reviews for Never Leave Your Dobe Wanting…
fangirlhaven chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
I hope to see more of this material. This was just HOT. WAY TOO HOT... /3/
lulu422 chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
Dang it must have came naturally to you then. That was awesome for a first time.
pampoo chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Loved it.
Ookami-Ryuu chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
*laugh* I love pushy!Naruto.

/Dragonwolf
lovemahBF chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
hot hot hot HOT!
XxCharlottexX1 chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Aye, not tryin to be a creep but yah spelled Yaoi wrong. Just tryin to help. But, this story is quite AMAZING!
KiTsUnE-cHaN18 chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
man this is ur first? this is way too good! i cudnt believe that this was ur first yaoi fic? great job and i luv it!
Sesshysgirl06 chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
I like agressive uke! I find them so hot! Hehehe Nice story!
inuyashabambino chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
FIRST LEMON EVER MY FUCKING ANUT SALLY!

DO CHU RELIZE HOW MUCH TISSUES I USED UP READING THIS STORY?

u kno wat...

just...

just rite more yaoi ok?

thank chu.

it was a good story tho.
Sake-Chama chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
Pretty damn good for a first timer. Good luck you should write more. JA for now .
SoundSystem chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
OH! That was so hot! Wow, AMAZING sex scene! You did a really good job for your first narusasu, kept them in character. This was awesome, you should definitely do more of them!
and Teng chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
lol, you should change the summary thing. I almost didn't read it because it said "NaruSasu".
YinKeket chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
It was really good for your first .it was funny naruto was on the couch and messing with sasuke's mind. keep up the good work and do your best.
Gothic Anime Lover chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Well... THIS WAS FANTASTIC for a newby PLUS your first lemon... I'm so proud... there were only a few minor gramatical and spelling errors... and a few typos... BUT other then that, fantastic. Good job. (And I could beta for you if the work load is relativly light... I like helping people w/content writing and such but I have a LOT of work to do...)
purropolisprincess chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
wow for this being your first i would have never guessed it is really good! but the ending is a bit abrupt anyway i liked this so you should write more!
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