Reviews for Love in an Elevator
Danny Phantom's Lover chapter 1 . 1/14/2016
Really Roy? A few hours though? )
kaylee.black.792 chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Um ok
Half Demon Alchemist chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Omg that was hilarious! Poor Al and Winry! Oh my god. Hahahaha.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Nice, liked the ending, its always funny with awkward situations
your fan chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
"do you mine?"
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahahaha
"Ed and I will be done in a few hours" when Ed already came!

Good story. I trust that you made more!
Amaya Nanashi chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
I shall tell you why alchemy was used in this story...I am a little shocked that no one realized Roy is very cunning...
YokuMiya chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Omg I love the ending xD poor Winry an Al I would hate to walk in on something like that. But if the elevator is alchemy proofed how did Al use alchemy to fix it?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Now THAT'S a story!
pervy girl rl chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
! That was so smexy and funny i like how al and winry get an eyefull at the end you should have made them join in i know i a perv and a girl lol well thats all keep up the good work.
Fullmetal.Alchemist.Fan chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Although you really need to work on writing stories, you had excellent plot and a near perfect dialouge set. :)
enimzaj chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!

that is all.

-jaz
Celeste Rose chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
OhEmGee

That was so funny.

"We'll be done in a few hours."
Ryuuk96 chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
appending doom is right! bwahaha! thats something no bro want tuh see hi older bro doing!
SinsofMidnight chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
Wow. Elevator sex is hot... your brother as an audience? Not so much.

Ha, it was good!
Purishirakun chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
ROFL
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