|Reviews for I've Been To The Future|
| Cat chapter 6 . 4/7/2016
The sotry idea in general is really good, but everything else is just... Not.
Everyone cries, ALWAYS, WHY? You're making them look like crybabies, when they should be quite the opposite.
Jack/Ianto relationship is written so poorly and every dialog they're involved, there's always a "I'm so sorry" coming generally from Hack, apologising for the stupidest things.
The names are repeated constantly
"jack, do you love me" Ianto asked Jack "I love you Ianto" Ianto said to Jack. Ianto was so happy Jack loved him.
It's just so ridiculous.
Plus, all of those "ye" and "ciya" are driving me crazy.
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 29 . 5/12/2013
Huff... finally...! Finally finished this fic!
I do wondering just now when will it ended, after the cas solved and they still 'buddy-buddy' and 'loving-loving' with each other... haha *peace*
I'm so glad and relieved with the couple(s) in here! My favorite! *grinned*
And the drama was good too! :D
| Madadh chapter 2 . 4/25/2013
The "babe" wording is just not for me. The characterization of Jack and Ianto is off to me.
| Dontruinthisforme chapter 11 . 1/29/2013
The "Ye" thing is really bothering me, and the fact that the BAU are using British terms kind of puts me off, other than that it's great!
| Degizzie chapter 8 . 12/20/2011
I can't help it. This is gonna be negative. How old are you? The story/plot itself is alright but come one! Really? The way you wrote this story is completely ridiculous!
Do you think that in real life people are like that al the time? It's just not realistic. I actually cringed when I read your story.
Truthfully I more skimmed it because I just couldn't bare the awfulness of it all. Plus you're writing to much dialoge. Some description of places and people and environments would have been nice.
I agree with 2CoyoteBlue on this.
All I can say is: just keep on writing! Obviously there are people who like your stories and wil read them. And hopefully there will also be some people with good knowlegde about how to write to give you some helpfull pointers. Because I usually spot a good story when I read one, but I myself am completely clueless on how to actually give writing tips. The one big tip I can give is this: keep it real. A story has to be realistic. In emotions, in people's reaction and how people talk.
I hope you catch my drift.
| SayidRocks chapter 31 . 9/4/2010
Hotch and JJ, especially Hotch, are just trying to take care of everyone, aren't they?
| SayidRocks chapter 23 . 8/23/2010
I'm still reading it. I actually went and looked up some stuff on 'Torchwood' because of this story, but haven't had a chance to watch the show yet.
| PinkHimeLacus chapter 17 . 7/22/2010
This story is so funny. I love the way the team treats Reid. I love him getting whumpage and attention. Just no romance for Reid please. Everyone else's is adorable and sweet. So well written and detailed. Love the story. Thanks for sharing!
| Deleted Account Perm chapter 5 . 6/23/2010
I like the idea and plot of the story.
I've noticed Ianto finishes almost every sentence directed at Jack with 'jack' or at least last chapter down. But there wasn't much of that in this one so that was great!
aww but in this chapter people cried ALOT!
As in a lot alot!
Too many tears makes me feel I bit overwhelmed.
Overall good story!
| x-Pretty-Kitty-x chapter 14 . 6/15/2010
So anyway g2g. hope u all enjoy. bye, assignment tym xxxxx
| KnitKnut chapter 2 . 10/31/2009
It started out as a good story but a bit off the cannon story line, yes, jack and Ianto get it on but never this much and never in a middle of a case. I have watched this show from the start to the fifth day of the CHE mini series.
I could not finish reading past the first chapter. I kept thinking through the entire chapter do you even watch the show at least once.
| TracyLynn chapter 9 . 5/11/2009
First of all, I want to say I really loved the cross-over and wish there were more between these two shows. I think you really incorporated the characters together well.
Now, please don't take this as a negative, because it totally is not...but you lost me on this chapter...I am not an Emily/Hotch or Reid/JJ fan at all...so I am going to drop out for now. But, again, this is not a reflection on you or your writing, this is totally me so don't take it as a bad review. I know there are a lot of fans of those pairings out there and they are going to continue to love this story.
I will look forward to more from you in the future. Keep writing.
| Profilerreid chapter 9 . 5/8/2009
I was so scared there for a second that you were going to kill Reid. I'm glade he made it and they caught Smith. Update Soon!
| 2CoyoteBlue chapter 5 . 5/3/2009
Well, if I ever wondered what Torchwood would be like if acted and written by grade-school girls, now I know. Do Jack and Ianto get through two sentences in a row where they aren't pouting at each other about some alleged slight? "May I have a Coke?" "OMG! A Coke! You don't love me any more! You're going to run off with our waitress!" "Oh, yes, pookie bear, I do love you so much!" "Really, my lemon drop?" "Oh, yes, pumpkin pie!" "For no good reason, I'm not sure I believe you." *pout, pout* *hot sex* "I really do love y- OMG, they brought me a diet Coke! You hate me!" etc, etc, ad nauseum.
Good thing I'm not reading any farther, because my Mary Sue alarm is whooping so loud over Melody Grace Sparkle-poo Sunshine Magic Taylor. Is she going to marry Hotch by the end of this, or will we be subjected to horrific, drawn-out "misunderstandings" between Jack and Ianto. (See comments above and replace "Coke" with "Mary Sue".)
If a two-minute "bonding" with a strange man makes Mary Sue Jr into a stronger, more confident girl, then she has some serious emotional issues. I predict she's pregnant by high school.
And BTW, the LAST people who would think Aisling is a unique name would be from the UK - THAT'S WHERE THE NAME COMES FROM.
| Profilerreid chapter 8 . 4/27/2009
That chapter was quite funny. It was sad when Morgna mentioned that Reid has never had a girlfriend, but I'm glad they made up. Also at least Morgan was told about Garcia liking him. I hope that at one point he acts on what he was told and asks her out or something. Its also good that Jack and Ianto have worked everything out, now their one big happy family. The part where JJ, Reid, and Gwen where acting like kids was so funny! It made me laugh really hard. I can't wait to "meet" John Smith (Great name by-the-way :P) Update Soon!