This just fucking sucked. Shitty plot all around. Why bother writing this garbage?

Someone rec'd this story on Facebook yesterday, and I can't believe I never read it before. I LOVE angst/tragedy. And, this just fit the bill. Well done. I don't think I've read a story with this plot before. It was certainly sad, but it made so much sense.

Thanks!
Sally

Wow! Just, Wow!

im surprised alice hasn't told him that he killed his mate.

Man did not see that end coming but totally should have I suppose what with his feelings on himself and all. Dark as ever but enjoayable.

off to the volturi perhaps...

Well this fic deserve its name for sure. Thanks for sharing (I guess) :) nice work

Excellent job on this fic.

Fantastic story. Really well done. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.

To me, this kind of Edward is simply just another religious fanatic who kills in the name of religious beliefs. The biggest mystery about him is why he doesn't just kill himself. After all, the reason most believers avoid suicide is that they think suicides go to Help. However, if Edward is already damned, then he isn't losing anything by taking his own life; better that he just do it and get it over with.

I kinda liked it, though I really hoped Bella wasn't actually dead and would claw her way out of the ground or something.

I'm confused how if she were already in the process of changing due to the venom that Edward injected into her how breaking her neck would kill her? Wouldn't the venom just heal the fracture? Unless maybe the spinal cord was severed and thus the heart stopped. Definitely no HEA this time.

This story was a TwiFanFictionRecommendation. U were right to warn that it is dark. Can't wait to see how u end this.

It's. . . .simply heartbreaking.

This story played upon a edward with less control.